|Reviews for Tales of Obscura Hieizou Arc|
| MARheaven-ninja 3/14/12 . chapter 1
This story does have a good start but you could slow down with the pacing, and might not have been such a good idea putting the first nine chapters on the first day, it gives the readers too much to process. I also would've called you out on not introducing any characters we know yet but hey I did the same thing.