W-wow. That's sad. Really, really sad. Dude, your story is an amazing one for Randall. It makes me cry. It's just beautiful.

boo hoo that so sad I think I may cry :(

but loved the chapter _

This was a great chapter well done. This was a very powerful chapter.

Aww, that's so cute! Randall had a teddy bear and he thought it (she) was his only friend :3

I felt like Samantha while reading this chapter "Poor Randy"
/This may not sound like something bad, but the person who brings this up makes me feel guilty about it every time they laugh./
Okay this line confused me a little bit, mind clarifying?
I really don't like Mike right now, okay sure when I was younger I was really scared and didn't like Randall either but COME ON! He was just a baby. Really good chapter, YAY! HE GOT ADOPTED! :3

Aww poor Randall, he didn't ask to be put in that situation. I just want to pick him up and take him home, the poor thing.
Okay... WHO DA HELL DO HIS PARENTS THINK THEY ARE? HUH? Oh my gosh I was just so heart broken.
Love your description of the different monsters.
Sad day, great name for the story/book.

I don't know about anyone else, but I want a new chapter. I love this story and really would like more.
I've found out that I love Randall, he's really not that bad of a guy. I really would like to see more about his past... and even some of the present? It's well put and such an amazing piece.
Yeah, there's nothing worse than people picking on you. And speaking of horrible pranks, Wazowski! That was a terrible prank you pulled. Can't wait to hear the end of this story.

I love this story. The only thing that irks me is that "The Trail" should be spelled "The Trial". Other than that, I love what you've done with this whole concept. Poor Randall.

Poor Randall! :( Somehow I always imagined him to be emotionally and physically fragile, and you've summed up why that is perfectly.

And I like Cheyenne already! Randall needs to be paired up with someone unconventional.

Those jerks took Randall's journal! I feel so sad for Randall, but for some reason, the part about the chokey made me burst out laughing.

I really like Cheyenne she's awesome.

Oh, wow. Poor Randall! Will anything good ever happen to him? :( Anyway, thanks for another great chapter!

As soon as I saw Talent Show I thought "Randy Tap Dancing?" But magic act is also cool for him! And Chey's right, he'd look so handsome in a little tux (right?)
Cool and original song too! It had a great beat and the rhyme scheam was awesome!

Aww, Randall getting scared by the spider made me think of movie that did a similar joke, all I remember is "retract the claws" hehehe.
And little Randy practicing, he's just trying so hard! It's good we know he makes it, but you can feel he's trying. It's kind of weird TELLING him to be afraid but...hopefully Chey knows what she's doing.
"I'm afraid of confidence" tehehe that was funny!
Tehehe "I do that enough at night!" line...is Randall a bedwetter? Guess that links up to your other stories that he wore diapers when he was older (can't help but wonder what bullies would do if they found THAT out! Or Chey for that matter!)

awe that is sad that Randalls parents were abusive