| Reviews for A Ranger in the Clans |
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Guest 2/10/13 . chapter 7 Your story is okay, but its not the best. Then again, I suppose it's hard to write a Warriors/ Rangers Apprentice crossover. |
Megadracosaurus 12/10/12 . chapter 4Good story! I have some names for the characters: Will: Raventail Halt: Darkpelt Horace: Wolfheart Allys: Hawkclaw Cassandra: Foxfang |
blazzer12 10/8/12 . chapter 7UPDATE SOON PLEASE i LOVE THIS STORY |
blazzer12 10/8/12 . chapter 6i LOVED IT PLEASE UPDATE THE STORY SOON! |
anonymous 10/7/12 . chapter 7 Excellent! Now keep going, just make them find Horace and have Jayfeather look at Will. |
Draco Olim 8/23/12 . chapter 7chapters are a little short |
booknerdhere 8/5/12 . chapter 7Plz continue this! |
booknerdhere 8/5/12 . chapter 4Poor Will... so cornfused. XD |
booknerdhere 8/5/12 . chapter 3Oh REALLY?! Are you serious Will? You can ask a billion questions in that amount of time! XD Swiftpaw reminds me of me... talking alot. |
booknerdhere 8/5/12 . chapter 2Woot woot! RA AND Warriors! Totally awesome! Now just add LOTR and this would be a dream come true. |
Cheesypriestess 4/28/12 . chapter 4Tideheart...that...doesn't really make sense either. I'd be annoyed at their hatred of Shadowclan, but that's a common characteristic of Thunderclan cats, I guess. Just...don't make them evil. |
Cheesypriestess 4/28/12 . chapter 3If a cat is named Swift- they should really be black and white, as there's a bird called a swift that is black and white. Otherwise the name just doesn't make sense, because there's no way of knowing how fast a kit will be at birth. Other than that, though, you seem to be doing pretty well. |
Cheezeburger 3/19/12 . chapter 4 Thumbs UP! |
SwiftslashxLeafstorm 3/15/12 . chapter 3 Soo, you took my OC's name, didya? Ha ha lol jk but seriously, I'm interested about seeing what happens next. |