you have some skill in this. sorry that i cant offer more, but i really do like this series. Ciao!

No worries, yo. This is supposed to be fun. A fun thing you do on your spare time and when you have the motivation and the groove to write it down. Just take a small break and please come back to writing your awesome story! I hope everything is going well with your other stories. I wish you all the best.

Like the last part, it was really good. Mind your punctuation, and keep going! :)

Whoot! Can't wait for the real update! I hope all your technical troubles will be fixed soon. I love your story. Best of luck.

I like your story. The plot is great! Or it's just from the anime... But whatever! At least they are great! Helps a lot since I wanna know what happen in the next episode! ((I'm desperate to buy the dvds so I still don't watch the anime.. TT But I'm okay with spoilers. They keep me calm when watching the anime. Or else I won't watch what happens next.. -.-'))

I hope you still continue this! Hope you do the best! *thumbs up* Please update! :D

Oh no...poor Levy hope she will be fine huhu..and I can wait for the final & real fight between 3 dragon slayers hoho...keep up the good work & can't wait for the next chapter )

ah? a cliffhanger... okay.. I understand about that, but please update the next chapter quickly.. I know I'll be reading other fanfics which makes me forget some parts in other fanfics..

The story and plot is great! :D I couldn't help but feel like I'm glaring all the time just to know how Gajeel feels.. ._. He seems to have a crush already... maybe... Levy's words made Gajeel... you know... like.. good.. and something like that..? It feels touching... :')

I want to review every chapter of this story, but I'm the type who only likes to review a story that already have many chapters at the last one.. I'll check this story again to make sure I don't miss reading the next chapter. :)

Keep up the great work! :D

Oh wow...just wow..the fight just awesome...huuuuu..now I can't wait for the next chapter )

Hoho new reader in the house..and wow..I like your fiction..hoho..something new about it..and about Gajeel I seriously hope he didn't betray Fairy Tail & betray Raven Tail...and the moment between Gajeel & Levy just so love-love ahaha...keep up the good work & can't wait for the next chapter )

Not bad, but you could really try to improve the grammar and details. Its an interesting concept, and so far a wonderful story, but there are somethings that could have been said differently.

I hope you don't mind the criticism, but that a side this could be a very entertaining story. I just need to read the rest of it

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Aww. Blushing Gajeel is so cute! I'm glad you updated. It was a cute chapter. I can't wait to read the smack down with the three dragons. Even though I've watched it and read it in the manga. I'm still interested in how you will write and describe the event.

Best of luck with everything, Can't wait for the next update!

Whoot! Daily update! XD

How adorable! Totally in character! I can't wait to read the next update!

love your work, keep it up dude

Hi. I like your story. It is new concept. I'm glad that you update so fast :D

I hope that in new chapter will be more Levy and Gajeel conversation :)

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This chapter seems rushed. I really wished that you spent more time with the details of the battle. Although the deviation from what happened could have been more interesting if you made it more detailed. Why did Gajeel suddenly start fighting Jose? What were his thoughts while he was fighting? I'm glad you updated though.