|Reviews for The Girl with Red Hair|
| virginger 4/10/12 . chapter 5
Ahaha! Thanks for the lengthy update! I enjoyed very much! I particularly would want to know more about the little story at the end, but that can wait until I've had enough naruto-harry bromance. _ Soo cute! XD Maybe a bit of harry-Itachi friendship too!
I like what you did with harry's summons. It's interesting.
I hope you can post the next chapter soon! _ God bless!
| HeWhoWatchesFromTheMist 4/10/12 . chapter 5
This stuff is golden I tell you, GOLDEN! You write well, and I feel like Im behind harry's eyes the whole time, as it should be from this perspective, I hail you a grand writer, fit to write such things that amuse me so well!
| exaigon 4/10/12 . chapter 5
I can't wait for the next chapter!
No seriously I might die (not really) if it takes too long! Please update soon!
| In The Mix 4/10/12 . chapter 5
Great chapter! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
| schnookums 4/10/12 . chapter 5
So sad, but well written. Can't wait to see the growth of the boys.
| Ralob 4/10/12 . chapter 5
Awesome update! You really captured Harry well- his petulant sulking at Tsunade and Jiraiya was amusing. His grumbles over his height also made me grin.
I can't wait to see where this all goes. You definitely have an extremely interesting base to build off of. Well done.
| Morbious20 4/10/12 . chapter 5
Awesome chapter but that was a very cruel ending :( lol. Needless to say I'm greatly looking forward to the next chapter . I agree I think you did very well writing Harry's grief. It'll be interesting to see if or perhaps more accurately when Harry gains some measure of control over the Foxes chakra and if/when he'll learn Kage Bushin etc . Keep up the outstanding writing and post again soon if possible .
| Alec McDowell 4/10/12 . chapter 5
Worth the wait for this. You didn't take any longer than the other chapters to update this one but I am enjoying this story enough to check almost every day for a new chapter.
Hari's grief was interesting. He didn't sit around crying all the time, but his refusal to leave the hospital for so long was not surprising at all. I loved him refusing to let Naruto out of his sight a lot, too. Just born and he's already a great big brother. Though Naruto should probably be grateful he wasn't born a girl later on when over protective brother Hari comes into play!
If I'm reading things correctly, Hari is shaping up to have a hell of a Suiton affinity. From the waters in his mind holding back Kyuubi to him summoning a Sea Toad of all things... Looking forward to how that plays out. As little as I like the geta sandals- really who with less than Jiraiya's skill could wear those in a fight and not trip or have them fly off?- I'm thinking if he really works on it at the academy by the time he graduates his balance and speed will be super impressive. I mean, if you can fight at all with those, without them you'll be killer. With him using the chakra chains last chapter (And really why hasn't he tried using those again?) I'm hoping he has a good secondary as well- for example if he could channel Raiton chakra up the chains it'd be a great way to grab and subdue an enemy quickly.
Hari's increased body weight. The only possibility I can see is that Orochimaru gave him Shikotsumyaku but I'm not sure how he'd have gotten a hold of any Kyuga DNA. It's still a few years before he finds Kimmimaru after all. I'm hoping it's not the case because I'm having trouble picturing how Hari might incorporate this into his style. It might be due to the differing chakra nature he has from Kyuubi I guess. I'm going with him having the Yin chakra since Naruto has Yang in canon but I'm not sure what if any changes that might make.
I found the fact that nobody else figured out that Hari was holding half of Kyuubi very interesting. For one, it shows their negligence in checking him over after the fight, and two it means that it's likely that at least one of these boys will slip under the radar of haters inside and outside the village. I could easily see Hari making them let slip his status just to keep eyes away from Naruto in that regard. And the fact that Kyuubi seems to have done away with the curse seal doesn't surprise me; hopefully they go poking around Hari's head soon to see what's up.
Very relieved that Minato woke up; even if he's not in good enough shape to be Hokage anymore him being there is very nice. Looking forward to the reunion next time around.
The little chapter at the end- if you are keeping it around it brings up some interesting things. The way it read, Kyuubi himself was objecting to the wand. Even if it's just Hari's chakra what if it doesn't like the idea of channeling through a focus? Looking forward to the far off future to figure that out a bit.
Alright I think I've covered all I want to so, hope to see the next update before too long.
| SeanHicks4 4/10/12 . chapter 5
Interesting chapter, I dont think I've seen many Minato rcovers from the sealing...even without the coma time, still confused about what effect sealing part of Kuram has on Harry passed eating Orochimaru's soul bit in the seal...Did he eat Tom's too? Almost seems like Harry's becoming a Jiraiya clone with white hair, toad summons, and geta, or am I reading too much into it? What's his age again, and how long untill Hogwarts?
| Firehedgehog 4/10/12 . chapter 5
yeah, minas awake and hopefully will recover
| irezel 4/10/12 . chapter 5
HEEEEEEEEEEEEHEHEHE, omigaaawd so cool. cannot wait for more!
| Beloved Daughter 4/10/12 . chapter 5
Arg! You just HAD to leave the chapter off on that note, didn't you? Sigh... I do so love this story...
Still, 14,000 words is nothing to sneeze at! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
| suitsfan22 4/10/12 . chapter 5
You are amazing. Simply wonderful. I really liked this chapter, and I can't wait for more Harry/Naruto/Sannin interaction!
| Flying Raijin 4/10/12 . chapter 5
so harry has the dead bone pulse of the kaguya? don't really see the interest in that... i0ll go as far as saying that it is the first let down in this story. I stomached the hair changing color well, and was obviosly expecting something out of it. Even though I didn't think you should have done it. I think it's abit too much, you already gave him Uzumaki special abilities, plus the kyuubi and now a kekei genkai? that's enterely too much. And if anything, it'd make more sense to be something relating to the senju as they are distant cousins...
anyway, this won't make stop reading this as i still do very much enjoy this story. I just don't understand the need to pepper harry with all different kinds of exoctic abilities. The Uzumaki special abilities would be enough and understandable, although it's known that the true Uzumaki strength inhabits those which have their caracteristic red air, which harry doesn't have. And then there is still the 'wizard' aspect which sincerely I don't see Harry having much of an interest in it, but it's still something more (well that depends on your plans for the plot of course)
| Rimshooter 4/10/12 . chapter 5
Wonderful, all throughout!
But the one liner at the end... I think it seems kind of an injustice. I was really worried about it and then the only attention it's given is a single line?
Are you going to go into more detail about it? If not, I sense a major time-skip coming.