 Talking Hawk 7/25/02 . chapter 1Awwwwwesoooomee. ) I really liked this! Boromir's great - can't get enough of him - and this was a stupendous idea. I would've liked more thoughts and word accentuation (like "*would*" instead of just "would"..oh, never mind). But the stuff you had was great. Makes you appreciate the movie a lot more! But in any case, seeing it all from Boromir's POV was really interesting. While reading this story, I got really annoyed at Aragorn when he spoke up. ) Oh, and the part about Legolas and Gimli "pointedly looking away from each other" was hilarious! So was the Merry and Pip thing. - (I would've thought that everyone would've just stared at Pippin for his question, but chuckling was all right too.) Superb job!
Oh, and just a reminder - "Only One Can Be Saved" chapter ten is now up. Two more to go! Please read and review. D Thankies. |
 Lhunuial 7/20/02 . chapter 1Well done! You've portrayed Boromir's thoughts very well. I like this. I think many of us would like to know what went through Boromir at the council, even though in the movie I thought I could see it quite clearly on his face too. Well done. Keep on going! |
 ClaudiaofBree 7/19/02 . chapter 1I think this is very interesting and realistic take on Boromir's thoughts! This would be even more interesting to continue along the journey with Boromir's thoughts-what was going through his head when he picked up the Ring on Caradhras, in Moria, and finally when he succumbs to the power of the Ring and attacks Frodo. I like his tender thoughts toward his brother and Merry and Pippin. Great job. |
 fael tinu 5/28/02 . chapter 1This is really good! I had fun reading it;! I hope you enjoy my story! God bless |
 ThePet 5/24/02 . chapter 1Interesting idea, a sort of POV novelisation. I like it so far, hope you keep writing :-) |
 cha 5/23/02 . chapter 1 so far so good. inside his head is a good place to flesh out the character I look forward to the next installment. |
 anon 5/23/02 . chapter 1 This is a very nice start you have here. I love how you've worked out Boromir's POV in this. It all works nicely:). |
 shirebound 5/23/02 . chapter 1Excellent! I look forward to more vignettes like this one. |
 Ross meril 5/23/02 . chapter 1Wow! This is great. I love how you added the thougths of Boromir. I hope you will continue. |
 Ayva Trance 5/23/02 . chapter 1hey! well I think you should continue this because well I think its very interesting that you put parts of the movie and the book in the story and its very well written and it fits Borromir's personaility perfectly |