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No angst? What's going to happen in the next chapter but a LOT of introspection and anxiety? Seriously, though I look forward to your next chapter, whenever you choose to update.

Write more, please! Though I really do prefer Harry with Luna, rather than with Pansy. She's a lot more interesting and they click way better.

Ho... Ly... Shit! Even the 'poncey little cunt' got some. Nice one, mate.

The story is good. I really like it, but i want to know if there will be any update?

Wow, that escalated quickly. On another note, great story I really love the original story idea with a Harry who isn't completely focused on voldermert.

Okay... you have single handedly renewed my love of Luna. Love it!

All the drama around poor Harry, and you can't even help but think that he deserves it. I really want a happy ending though...

Brilliant story, looking forward to more.

Story went from ok to stupid this chapter.

holy shit that's one hell of a love pentagon lol

Love the story so far, can't wait to read more!

This harry has the best problems! I wish I had Luna fighting over me!

Christ, Luna's right, man. Harry is a pussy in this chapter. And wow, Hermione comes across as a real bitch.

Interesting plot indeed! I don't think I've read another story where Voldyshorts actually died for good when he tried to off the Potters. Great drama, too!

I don't like the protagonist. Also, the plot so far has been entirely melodrama.

Without Harry, there is nothing to explain Ron and Hermione's relationship. It was pretty weird in canon, but with no Harry there, it's implausible they would hang around each other. Your Ron is a dumbass and your Hermione is a victim of abuse who keeps coming back for more of Ron's bullying. How did that dynamic develop in this AU?

In canon, Pansy is not pretty.

Your protagonist is not in control of the situation. It's like he's watching himself speak and act and he's dissatisfied with his performance. It's realistic, but it's not very fun to read.