Guess who finally got a account?! XD (username Kuroinekosan was already taken durnit!)

This was an entertaining fic :) lighthearted and silly, but it still had some nice bits of insight and world-building in it. They were thrown in into the dialogue very casually, and that makes those kind of details feel organic to the scene and not like info-dumping. A small thing, though, is that the Selkie island is called LEUda, not Lueda. Regardless, this was good!

Ha! I enjoyed this quite a bit. You seem to have thought quite a bit on the subject of Selkies. Culture, race relations, and even tradition speckle your fic like they belong there.

I'm a bit sad that your Selkie character so far has gone unnamed. While it seems he stands for a generic Selkie, surely there are characteristics unique to him, and it feels strange not to know his name.

Your Hana Kohl is wonderful. Dah Yis is right on as well. I was very surprised by the ages you gave them, though. They certainly don't look fourteen or younger to me. Also, I think in the game Hana insults the Tipa caravanners as looking young to her (or being younger than her, can't remember).

Since this was a humor story, I will forgive the exaggerations of drunkenness. :) Let's just chalk it up to poor reactions to the strange liquid.

You have some spelling and grammar mistakes. Consider enlisting a beta? It could only help.

Overall a very entertaining story!