I was moved by this story. Im a crying mess .
This was amazing one of the best stories i've ever red, so beautifully written and heart wrenching.
Thanks for writing it

I am at a loss of words. This piece was so powerful and moving...it takes a lot of talent for someone to write like this.

This story is so powerful. I'd be a liar if I said I didn't cry, I cried like a are both so brave to embarking on their beautiful story. I hope she get her gallery in Paris.

GOSH. That ending line, man. Nail in the coffin.

I wish I knew who wrote this so I can subscribe to them :(

amazing... Sobs...

*sob* oh my god... I can't stop crying, but it was so worth it. What a wonderful little peace of heaven you created here. Very well done and real. Thanks. *sniff*

I can't stop the tears. I have to thank you for your poignant words and romantic honesty. You've moved me -far beyond the Mac screen- into the heart of Paris. As I sat here reading your piece, I felt and prayed and loved and lost right alongside Bella and Edward's relationship as it progressed. Definitely a story I will be revisiting many times to come.

SOB!

Wow. That was quite a powerful story...such a sad ending but such a lovely story. Great job.

If i want to go to Paris after this I crave for Paris, what a beautiful story i hope u win is the perfect one-shot story and besides Bella made me think a lot of stuff i even want to make a list like hers and you know that even if is full of angs i like that the sickness follow its course it made it more real the pasion is palpable and great. I'm looking forward knowing who is behind this amaizing work. Thank you for writting this amazing and great story.

Love

Mariana

oh, i LOVED this — the live life fully, joyfully, and lovingly through tragedy. beautifully done right up to the last line. i'm sure many or even most loved it, but not me, sorry. i wanted you to know how much i enjoyed it till then, and i hope you receive this simply as feedback. that is certainly how i mean it.

hugs,

mal

*snot-sobbing* Oh wow, that was so, so pretty and so, so sad. I'm glad she didn't walk away from him when he told her his prognosis at the very beginning of their friendship...many would. The time they had together was powerful and beautiful, as was this story. Thank you for writing.