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| Reviews for New Unwanted Home |
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  Megan Gollan 10/10/12 . chapter 4 Great Story! Really interesting :D Keep going with it, you left everyone curious ! |
| Hoellena 10/9/12 . chapter 4 Two words: Amazingly Catchy :3 Keep going! :D I am curious ! XD |
 mogi93 9/12/12 . chapter 4This was really interesting, I liked it a lot :D I don't know any betas, sorry :( can't wait for more :) |
| Watch Me Run 9/11/12 . chapter 4 So, there are quite a few grammatical errors you may want to work on, like "Where is him?" Which should really be "Where is he?" Simple mistakes that could easily be fixed though. Also I think I've said this before, but it's Isabelle, not Isabella. Also at times I feel Hugo is a bit out of character. I don't believe Hugo would ever curse really, but hopefully with a beta (make sure you find one who really understands the Hugo characters and enjoyed the film) these mistakes could be fixed. Interesting plot concept though. Good luck.:) |
| Guest 9/10/12 . chapter 4 Ohhh it's getting good can not wait for the next amazing chapter |
| Iscreamer1 9/8/12 . chapter 3 In support of some who are waiting for chapter 4, It's gonna be as empty as Death Valley. For the historical content, I hope you're being accurate. Also I'd like to see a small reference to "Somewhere That's Green" showing Hugo's loneliness. |
| mogi93 8/17/12 . chapter 3 Oh gosh, cliffhanger! Gah, I'm curious now :D I loved this chapter, it was so interesting! can't wait for the next one! :D |
| TheBFG 8/5/12 . chapter 3 Nice chapter! I love the cliffhanger... what are August's true intentions and why is Hugo in such a mess? I can't wait to find out. There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes here and there, such as writing a past- tense verb instead of a present- tense verb and mixing up adjectives and nouns. Fixing it up a bit will help the story a lot! Overall, I like it a lot. I hope you will introduce some of the characters from the original story back into this fic! |
| Peace10 8/5/12 . chapter 1 OMG I love it I can't wait till Friday!:) |
| Lilmissycoldax55 7/26/12 . chapter 1 Continue |
| Guest 7/26/12 . chapter 1 Please,i am BEGGING you to CONTINUE! You're killin me! |
| Asanatorftw 7/23/12 . chapter 1 Please please please please update:) im dying to know what happens and ive been checking for an update every day. You should chose a day to spend a lot of time on this story and write several chapters. Thank you for writing a good story thats not actually all about hugo and isabelle falling in love. |
| Guest 7/8/12 . chapter 2 Awwwww...Poor Hugo! :( I wanna give him a HUGE HUG! |
| Guest 7/2/12 . chapter 2 Nice please update this is so good please update with sugar on top? |
| isthisreallife18 6/26/12 . chapter 2 this is good i like stories like this, please update 'cause today's the 26th and i noticed it's been a while since you've updated :\ |
