|Reviews for The Relationship Between Mentor and Apprentice|
| DareSheDevil 8/28/12 . chapter 6
Uummm, pleeeeeeaaaaaaase update real soon!
| xXSniperKingXx 7/10/12 . chapter 6
I love the chapter i cant wait to see what you do next and thank you for using Melissa it really means a lot to me.
| Alice the B-Rabbit 6/17/12 . chapter 6
Yayayayaya you used my oc! Great work update soon!
| DeathySophia 6/16/12 . chapter 6
Whoa, what's this 'rent' all about? That makes Danielle look like the bad guy here...
| lunarphase 6/15/12 . chapter 6
interesting 0.0 and you added titles XD nice :)
| Alice the B-Rabbit 6/14/12 . chapter 4
Forgot to add to the oc thing brianna is an outlaw in celestria and grizzleheim
| Alice the B-Rabbit 6/14/12 . chapter 3
...are you still takeing oc's? if u are here is mine :P
Full name: Brianna Ashblade
Apperence: Tanish, Green eyes, 5'7, short spikey red hair
Signature clothing: Red and Black Captian uniform (from dragonspyre)
Pet: pheonix (mount bat wings)
Personality: Awesome, suspicious of people she doesn't know, pyromaniac,always looking for a fight.
Backstory: Orphaned at age 5. After enrolling at Ravenswood she became well known to Ambrose's office because she always started fights with ice school students.
Markings: a scar along her right eye (red bangs cover it) and a small dragon tattoo on the back of her neck.
School: Fire (secondary death)
Other: easily bored
Special: I really don't care as long as its for dragonspyre
| DareSheDevil 6/2/12 . chapter 5
Oh, yay yay yay yay yay! Action time! And you used my OC, Thank you SOOOO much! Happy Diamond Jubilee Celebrations, my dear queen of England, And everyone else!
| xXSniperKingXx 5/29/12 . chapter 3
Your story is awesome and i would be honored if my character could be part of it
Full name: Melissa Bluebrezze
Home world: Mooshu
Appearance: Tan, Sapphire blue eyes, 5'7, long free flowing green hair, to guys irresistible,
Signature clothing: Green and tan colored Sultans Robes
Weapon: Charmers mystical flute
Pets or Mounts: Purple butterfly wings
Personality: Kind to others, always willing to help others, overprotective, prankster, Willing to face any challenge, Photographic memory
Back story: She lived in mooshu till she was 9 years old, after her home of was invaded Melissa and her Siblings Kane and Miguel Bluebreeze lived in Marlybone with their cousins family the Darkbloods. After enrolling in Ravenwood she easily became number 1 of the class before graduating her first year, she's been doing the best she can do ever sense while exploring the spiral.
Markings: Tattoos near shoulders saying "Courage and Love" on her right arm and "Fear and hatred" on her left all in Japanese
School: Main Life secondary Death (all death spells possible), Balance (only Spirit charm and ward)
Level: 53 (for now)
Relationship: none but want one
Other: special: Baroness of Celestia, Home is the sultans palace, pets are Miss Jake(Onyx Shenglong dragon), King Leo(Damp Demon), Miss Moose(shock Colossus), Mister Chase(Storm Snowman), Miss Zoey (Satyr),
| lunarphase 5/28/12 . chapter 5
Awesome! :D A bit confusing on the character to character switches but I got it lol :3
| DeathySophia 5/28/12 . chapter 5
Ooh... What did those Japanese words mean? :O anyways, I love the fight! And I like how you used Jackie. Lady Soulblood..? was that Jasmine? :O also I wonder what her relationship with Steph and Equinox is.. I really cant wait to read next!
| DareSheDevil 5/19/12 . chapter 3
Absolutely grand so far! Love it, anyway here's my OC:
Full name: Kayla Watershard
Home world: Krokotopia
Appearance: Long blond tipped brown hair. Almost black brown eyes. Tan skin. Slightly rosy cheeks. Soft pink lips. Incredibly beautiful.
Signiture clothing: Yellow and royal blue short wizard robes.
Weapon: razor wire wand
Pets or mount: Blue and purple pet dragon called Princess Roxy
Personality: She's the bravest, most knowledgable, most loyal Conjuror.
Back story: She was evacuated to earth when she was still a baby, due to a war on her home planet, Krokotopia, but she always thought that she belonged somewhere else, giving her a strong belief of magic in a faraway place from earth. Gamma, Merle Ambrose's pet owl, found her when searching earth for wizards. She was the only one old enough to go to RavenWood. When one a school trip to Krokotopia, her real parents claimed her as their daughter.
Markings: on the right of her neck, she has the cress of courage, which she earned by defeating some of the most powerful warriors in Krokotopia.
School: Myth is her first school, and storm is her second.
Other: special: Princess of Krokotopia.
Thanks, and you don't have to make her princess... But I would like it if she was.
| lunarphase 5/12/12 . chapter 4
Cool! I like what you did with her :)
| DeathySophia 5/12/12 . chapter 3
Hey hey, I'd love to join the forum :D
Full name: Jacqueline (got a nickname The Jackal)
Home world: Marleybone
Appearance: slim and tall. she has piercing blue eyes and black hair that mostly covered in the shroud of blue long-sleeved shirt under black vest. she's also wearing black ankle boots.
Weapon: (wand, staff, sword, etc): a katana sword, blue in color
Pets or Mounts: pet defender pig and the black wings (forgot the name)
Personality: she's very good in making strategies, a bit arrogant, very sensitive in the matter of money, love kids.
Back story: she's a bounty hunter, agrees to the highest bidder whether its good or bad. she helps kids in the street and dreams of building a house to help them all (kind of an orphanage) with her bounty money.
Markings: ninja girl? XD
School: Ice with a bit of Life and Death
Other: PM me if you want more info on her :)
| Naginos LeSerpe 5/10/12 . chapter 3
Just so you know this is also the backstory one of the main characters-and the villain- in my upcoming story: Shadow of the Moon.
Name: Valerian Moonskull
Signature Armor: Tattered black robes and hood.
Wand: Dark wooden staff with an onyx orb.
Backstory: Valerian was a death student when a prophecy was found that fortold that he would 'cloak the spiral in darkness'. Ambrose, for the safety of the spiral had him locked in stasis, where he would remain for 20 years. He escaped by mentally reaching out to students and tricking them into freeing him. When he was free he hated Ravenwood and Ambrose with a vengeance and took on the name 'Equinox'. He is currently wandering the spiral.
Appearance: Due to 20 years locked in an unaging stasis, he is rather gaunt and pale. He has short black hair, and blue-green eyes.
Home World: Equinox hails from Dragonspyre.
Markings: His features are rather skull-like.
Pet: Wraith named Eclipse.
Mount: Black Panther