|Reviews for Encounters|
| M. Mellow 12/2/12 . chapter 10
Wahhhh! He's at his mother's island! What will happen now? and yay! Lazue's finally awake! I missed her already!1 :d
| M. Mellow 12/2/12 . chapter 9
Awww that's so sad! How fortunate of Ace and Lazue to make it to an island in their current predicament!
| M. Mellow 12/2/12 . chapter 8
Ohohoho such a dramatic episode! I still cant figure out her devil fruits power? Paralysis? ... hmm... So confused! XD
| M. Mellow 12/2/12 . chapter 7
Wahh! so curious what her devil fruit may be! I hope it's something cool :D
| M. Mellow 12/2/12 . chapter 6
Could it be? could it be? A devil's fruit!
I applaud talented ma'am (sir?) the way you describe the ship incident was absolutely stunning! Best descriptive read of my life in FF Onepiece :D
| M. Mellow 12/2/12 . chapter 5
What a bitter sweet chapter! Will Ace leave Lazue on the next island? D
| M. Mellow 12/2/12 . chapter 4
ooo Lazue and Ace travelling together! :D How exciting XD
| M. Mellow 12/2/12 . chapter 3
Awww what a sweet chapter. and Loved the way you described Ace! I kept thinking "that is so Ace" XD dunno why, even though we don't get much of his personality check in the actual manga :p
| M. Mellow 12/2/12 . chapter 2
Lololol Well... who would have thought.. Ace let his pride get him whipped XD
Loved the bandit and Ace's encounter. And the firey attitude of lazue!
| M. Mellow 12/2/12 . chapter 1
Hahaha! Ass? Haahha I never thought of it like that!
I loved the way you described Ace!
simply amazing, is what I have to say for the chapter!
| BluePhoenix0101 12/1/12 . chapter 21
Finally another chapter! Jaunis is scary *shudders*
| Mistress Wiggle 11/8/12 . chapter 20
I've sped through this in an afternoon and it's ridiculously brilliant. It's certainly the best Ace/OC story I think I have ever read, and I really cannot wait to read more on it.
I also selfishly hope it gets a happy ending rather than the awful one Oda decided to write.
Cannot wait for the next chapter.
| Hahp Ends 10/31/12 . chapter 4
I admit that it would be pretty amusing to see someone be slapped in the middle of the street and react as if nothing had happened.
| Charlie's Rat 9/3/12 . chapter 20
You CANNOT kill off Thatch! Absolutely NOT! I forbid you to! D:
You could make this story very original by soiling Thatch's plan to kill Thatch and steal the fruit, and make Ace and Lauze go hunt the other member's of Blackbeard's crew, (fucking shit up on the way, stumbling across Luffy in Alabasta, dining and dashing, ...)
BUT JUST PLEEEEEEEEEASE DON'T KILL OFF THATCH! AAAAARGH!
| Tigereye13 8/25/12 . chapter 20
There are three things that you might want to change:
Even in this the("this the" does not sound right next to each other, so I suggest dropping one of them.) short period of time they were starting to feel like her sisters and the trust was beginning to solidify.
the first time she'd gotten drunk on the ship n(e)ary a year prior and belted out a tuneless song.
We're(Were) you hoping I could provide you with advice for something, or what?"
I have finally found time to read the latest chapter. Just moved back into my college dorm this past week and helped out with my club trying to attract new members to our club, so I haven't had much time to read this and leave a review.
I like how you take the time to describe this island that Ace and crew go to. What makes it different from other islands and what is considered precious to the people of the island. You also talked a bit about the culture which helps give more of a feel for this island. Actually you have done a good job with all the various islands that have been brought up here, but I think I haven't said anything before.
So, Ace has found another Devil Fruit book. And what is the free book that he picked up? Maybe it will be important, maybe it won't be. I'm leaning more towards it having some importance, since you like to drop little details and plot points that will become something either soon or will take some time to develop into something.
Ah, Lazue is having fun. Good to see that she has made some friends on the ship. Oh dear, this Mabel is going to have her heart broken. I don't know too much about her, but I have seen enough to already feel bad for her. Falling in love with Thatch...
And Teach's interest in the Yami Yami no Mi is being shown. Most people should know what all of this is building up to. So good job starting to pepper the story with details that should start to click with readers. I wonder how many people started to yell mentally, "Lazue, don't show him anything on that fruit!" Since as a reader, I know what happens but the characters in the story have no clue what will happen. Well, unless you want to brake the fourth wall but that has to be handled carefully.