|Reviews for For better or for worse|
| prothalla 3/21/12 . chapter 1
I didn't fully follow this story, I got a little confused with the sentence structure, I'm assuming English isn't your first language? Perhaps try and find a Beta to correct any grammatical errors it'll help the story flow... From what I could grasp it seems like a story with potential.
It's always good to see new wire stories :)