It's a rollercoaster of emotions. There's sadness and hope in constant fluctuation. We just got Lettuce back to her normal self and now this happens. Wow. I hope at least there will be a happy ending.

Yay, Lettuce is back. Wow, that was a lot of revelations. Everything seems right for now. Which makes me wonder: Did Lettuce remember and her and Ryou share a consciousness for a moment or were they just enveloped in light. Can't wait to see what happens next. :D

Wow, that wasn't smart of Pai. I would've just hightailed it out of there while there was a distraction. They don't need Lettuce. Lettuce needs to be back with the Mew Mew's. I hope Lettuce realizes this soon.

Oh Lettuce. Keep fighting and trying to recall your thoughts. I'm surprised that Lettuce is being so compliant. So after she gets what she wants, would she leave to be off her own? I hope the aliens plans go awry. Nice chapter. It explained a lot.

A few grammatical errors - you seem to switch from past to present tenses and vice versa - but meh, no one cares about that.

Two chapters? And interesting what happened.

OOOOOOOWWWW They finally make up and kiss! T.T I am so freaking happy!

I noticed some minor mistakes as in here: "(...) The way you way you were looking at the bag, we thought you would eat it whole (...)", but nothing serious :)

I really liked this one! Let's see what's comming next! :D

C'sMelody

Oh, now that was interesting, although I didn't think blue aqua had that kind of power.

Not boring, I think. Rather interesting.

Okay, so may I hope that the next chapter will be out soon and with much more action? :)

I really want to see Lettuce lose all her walls against Ryou again, I just love them really :)

Plus, I'm also curious about how you'll get the other together :)

C'sMelody

You really know how to keep your readers hanging, don't you? And you're alive! Yay!

You've said it, I really hope it's not three months until you update again.
I missed this story and there's no action on this, so I'm kind of disappointed, no offense, your writing skills are great and everything, but I do hope there's another update sooner. :)

C'sMelody

Owww, please continue! It's been a while without updates!

I'm really enjoying this story so please continue!

Please more! :D

this is awesome!

It's getting more and more interesting every time you update! I really hope to see some more in the near future, because I'm enjoying it a lot! :D

I'm also curious about what you have planned to the other characters.

By the way, I loved your idea of bringing Lettuce to the spot for a change and you could really make it interesting! :)

Thank you for sharing!

C'sMelody