i liked was almost a reversal of PS(Pinky Swear) only with less drama and no Tanya

ok so what made me really love this is the fact that as soon as I find out who the author is... Imma be a stick pin in their asses to makes this a two-shot. Reason being, I felt like certain thinks in this could be polished and more detailed. Also, I'd love to see some debauchery when Bella finally faces Mike and hell, the rest of her family and friends. This is def something that I cant shake. I could only imagine the look of horror on Mike's face knowing that not only did Bella not marry him but she snook off and got married while they were still engaged. WOW... thats a whole lotta MEAN SHIT! LOL

Anyway, great job hun and hey, best of luck in the contest :)

i enjoyed that! i love that he had no plan and jacob just took over. but he got the job done and ended up with his girl :) the proposal was pretty perfect :)

GOOD LUCK!

Good luck in the contest!

Cute :) I liked the idea. I thought it was nice, but you kind of left Newton and the regular wedding at odds. Good luck in the contest :)

Edward is lucky she took him back, he almost waited too long.

So...real love was stronger *sighs* :)

I think Jake was my favorite character in this! Nice twist having Bella already engaged when she got the proposal. Good luck in the contest!

I love that they got their HEA but I think Edward got it a little to easy.

This E is kinda a selfish a hole. Seriously. (:

But the writing was still wonderful and i am a sucker for a wonderful gay jake (: he always makes me giggle.