So, I'm horrible. I was going through my FanFic emails when I saw that I hadn't read this chapter, I thought I was up to date :P lol. I mustn't have seen the email come in :P

"Oh, please, Tawni, I think we all know that you'd never be able to find someone for yourself"

That made me laugh. Sorry, I'm not a Tawni fan :P

I keep forgetting that all these chapters have happened in such a short time. When Penelope said that it was only one day since the fire, it shocked me :P

Crazy world indeed.

:O OOOOHhh, Devon and Penelope in trouble... kinda :P

Nico is back? Interesting... Well, this story is crazy, but awesome. It's Crawesome? :P Anyway. Update soon :)

Wait, so this whole story has only taken place over two days?! It seemed like a lot longer.
AHH NICO HAS RETURNED! :O
UPDATE SOON! :D

It's NICO! Who else could it be, anyway. Awesome, awesome story! You are such an amazing writer! :) Update as soon as possible! If you can, please show a little bit more Channy and give us a hint or two about why Sonny left.

Ugh, I meant Chastity not Chloe. I can only remember Mackenzie Falls characters' names!

This story is amazing! The chapter was written so nicely, I still can't get over your writing. You'll make a great writer if that's what you want to become.
I get why Chloe did what she did but who kidnapped Zora? And why? Why would Chloe kidnap Zora? Why would Nico kidnap Zora? Where is Zora? So many questions! But I'll have to wait for the next chapter for you to answer these questions. :(
Update! :)

:O CHASTITY! Wow... You are the master of surprise Cynthia :P

Anyway that was pretty cool. The last bit was really captivating.

Well, I finally read this chap, like I promised :P

Hmm, I wonder if Nico is finally gonna come back soon...
WHAAATT!? CHASITY STARTED THE FIRE?! :O I think things in this story are gonna be getting INSANE soon!
UPDATE SOON! :D

That was pretty cool :)

Update soon.

Really good story and Chastity because she found Devon's phone when Penelope chucked it out the car :)

Hmm... I say Chasity answered the phone!
UPDATE SOON! :D

Okay, so I was reading this chap and I was thinking, "This is pretty good." Then I read the last part and I screamed in my mind.

I love it already and it's just the first chap :))

Wait, can you remind me what the letter said again? I can't remember that or what chapter it was in.
YES I SAW THE CROSSOVER AND YES IT WAS AWESOME! :D
UPDATE SOON! :D

So much drama :o
This is just like that one episode of Mackenzie Falls where that girl got kidnapped and there was a fire near The Falls and a chick went into a coma and then they found out that she was actually Mackenzie's long lost sister and then...
Okay I'll stop now ...
"Not that I watch it or anything" (;
But seriously this story is just amazing.
My Channy feels .
I'm sorry, I just love this so much (:
Thank you for this utterly incredible piece of genius :D xx

This is definitely a great story. :)

Like I said in my last review, you need to start italicizing So Random! and Mackenzie Falls because they're both names of a television show in a television show. Any time you mention them when you're italicizing a flashback, you have to un-italicize the show name.

Aside from that little grammatical error I caught, I'm loving the story and most of your grammar.

This is an awesome story so far. :)

Chapter lengths are pretty good. The only thing I have to comment on is that you need to start italicizing when you're writing a name of a show.