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| Reviews for Zim meets Robin |
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   Kelly Hizuri 8/20/12 . chapter 6"Yo, Danny Fenton he just fourteen, when his parents built a very strange machine." XD YAY! DANNY! |
| Kelly Hizuri 8/20/12 . chapter 5 The BB-Raven exchange was HILARIOUS! XD lmao |
| Kelly Hizuri 8/20/12 . chapter 4 I've noticed that you tend to misplace commas. They create a "comma splice" and create a choppy, incoherent sentence. |
| Kelly Hizuri 8/20/12 . chapter 3 Your dialogue is off. Ask Twins for help on this but mainly double space between new lines of speaking from a different character. |
| Kelly Hizuri 8/20/12 . chapter 2 ****Always capitalize "I" or "I'm"**** I can't figure out if the story is present or past tense... It flips around too much... Anywho...*grabs Gir and runs* |
| Kelly Hizuri 8/20/12 . chapter 1 Be careful of "your" versus "you're". Many people get confused on this. Also, your tenses weren't always correctly used. On another note: OMG GIR! I LOVE GIR! XD |
| Mr-Gregory-Samsa 8/2/12 . chapter 4 pretty damn good especially the detAIL TO THE cartoon and the script. i salute you. |
| Meow-Mixed-Weasel 7/10/12 . chapter 15 Great chapter! You really have talent. :) I liked your new and improved too. Hope to read more! |
| Awesomo3000 6/11/12 . chapter 13 Whoa, such an awesome and intense chapter! I love it! :) Keep up the great work! |
| CMR Rosa 6/1/12 . chapter 12 This was a good chapter. |
| Hinata28h 5/31/12 . chapter 12 This is very interesting 3 |
| CMR Rosa 5/12/12 . chapter 8 Good chapter, will Dib be in the next chapter. |
| CMR Rosa 5/2/12 . chapter 6 Great chapter, will Dib befriend the teen titans and get revenge on his classments? |
| InvaderZaz 4/27/12 . chapter 4 Yay! I truly didn't expect to find anything when I searched for a Teen Titans and Invader Zim crossover. |
| CMR Rosa 4/23/12 . chapter 4 Great chapter, does Starfire know who Zim is? |
