Heyy, this my first time reading a fic from this fandom... And it was awesome! I really did enjoy this :D its well written and you got their personalities and everything perfectly. I could totally picture most of this happening on the show X)

Great job!

Hi there , liked reading this...some

of the humor was real funny ... but toward the end it sounded a bit like Eric had like low self esteem , and I think though he has a lot of self deprecating tall he is basically a confident guy

Hi there , liked reading this...some

of the humor was real funny ... but toward the end it sounded a bit like Eric had like low self esteem , and I think though he has a lot of self deprecating tall he is basically a confident guy

Well we all know Eric will mess up again, but its just fun when he tries and makes up with Donna, pretty good for a first time !