lol! so cute and funny! I hope you continue this story it looks really good (:

I'm liking this so far.. Update soon

Drew makes me wanna grab a bat and bash in his head repeaditly until there is asolutely nothing left to bash but the ashes of his body that I burned earlier on.

Yes, I do hate Drew as well xD I'm sorry, but I found him as the biggest jerk in town. I mean, Paul was mean too, but he didn't annoy me. His hurr was purple. Who could hate purple hair ? xD

And then Harley... Everytime I heard him, my ears bleed. He makes me wanna go to Antarctica and club every baby seal I can find. But true, he is a fun character to use :3 RETARDS FOR LIFE :D WOOPWOOP.

Gotta say, I was expecting humor, but this is hilarious xD The Gengar part cracked me up. Of course you had to xD Mooning ? Seriously ? Qwertyuiopqwertyuiop I'D RATHER LISTEN TO THE LAVENDER TOWN SONG AND GET THE CHRONIC HEADACHE SYNDROM THAN GET MOONED BY FREAKING HARLEY -.-" I was actually close to getting it too ! The song is so cute, yet deadly

I hope you continue your other stories which I can't remember the names right now xD the high school one, the one with Ash disappearing and such... I love emo Dawn. Please keep her. Dx :3 Bye niiii!

Rolling Rainbow Star

-TheRebelx3

damn harley is so...not straight. lol usually characters like that piss me off but it jus made me laugh

in all honesty iui love all your fics but i would like to see this one the most since drew is the advanceshipper. i tried lightening up my view on drew but its hard lol youre my lsast chance my friend i hope i begin to like drew after this story.

I don't understand this fic, it says advanceshipping in the summary but Drew isn't evil? Love the chapter though and Harley is funny as hell.

Harley! I actually forgot about this character! Last time I saw him or bothered using him was in a year old dusty corner. From what ur portraying him, he could be the next kefka from final fantasy. anyways, this, is ok. It's nice to see drew in new light, even though these "moments" try their best to be in the "friend" zone. Anyways, I also noticed u saying drew part of evil or somethin like that. I am sad that I use that. Overall, 5/5!

Well this story is off to a great start. Also, I'm glad that I'm not the only AdvanceShipper that doesn't hate drew on this site. I'm really looking forward to this story.

Another great piece of Advanceshipping added to the site! YAY! This just makes me even more eager to see what you plan to do for your next big thing! Well, three more weeks and then we'll hopefully find out! Until next time!

I just want to say great story so far. You are one of my favorite authors ever. If it's okay, I would like to ask a favor of you. I need some help with my story: A New Region a New Adventure. Iv'e kind of been in a creative rut latley. If you could read it and then give a review for some suggestions, that would be great. Thanks a bunch. This is pearlshipper, signing off!

Hi! Although, I'm not really an advanceshipper I think I will make an exception because of your story! I really love the dialouge, especially Harley because he's so... Harley. XD

I think Drew, Harley, May, and Ash are well in character so congratulations on that. My only concern, not concern my only "suggestion" is I wish you would give more detail or write a paragraph or two. This first chapter seems to be mostly dialouge, but besides those things I like your story please continue when you can.

So an advanceshipping fic where Drew is a cool guy, don't really see that around except for Try to Remember Me. Anyway I hope you do add some jealousy on Drew's part cause it would only make sense for him to be a little jealous.