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   Marie Alexis Masen 3/2/13 . chapter 5oh my god! it was so cute! :3 :3 |
| BookLover342 1/28/13 . chapter 5 I liked this, it was good. There should be more AmyxElder fanfics! |
| How I Make Lemonade 12/19/12 . chapter 5 great cliff hanger! I can't wait to see where you take this story. also, cant wait for amy's dad's reaction :P UPDATE! |
| magickarpet14 8/15/12 . chapter 4 Okay now you have to update soon. And by soon I mean like now! So please UPDATE! |
| Crimson-skys 5/27/12 . chapter 4 Two things: 1: I really like this. :) it could be a little more detailed, but over all it's not a bad fanfic :) keep it up. 2: for an idea (and it's just a suggestion, and probably isn't a very good one) you could have something wrong with the baby. Jump forward a few weeks or something and have the baby too small, or have the lungs not develop properly or something (just an idea, again, and it's probably not what you want to write about...). Good luck with your writers block (sucks right?) and hope to see the new chapter soon :) xx |
