| Reviews for Depths |
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Guest 1/15/13 . chapter 5 I LOVE IT |
ZeldaIsis 1/6/13 . chapter 5Loved it. Just enough fluff with action. |
kuromi123 10/9/12 . chapter 5Lol, I loved it. :) |
flawed angel 9/15/12 . chapter 5Okay thank you for the humor repreive at the end I was in tears and a little laugh will either make me cry harder or stop crying. so yeah I cried harder! Haha Loved it! |
The-girl-with-purple-eyes 8/7/12 . chapter 5So thats why he hates crocs hmmm... |
TheStaryNight 8/1/12 . chapter 5Great story |
janzen222 6/14/12 . chapter 5i loved this whole story and i loved the last line the best "I offically hate crocodiles" |
sofieblaze96 6/6/12 . chapter 5I almost cried at the part where robin saw his parents. HOLY COW 0:40 AM! I need to sleep but your stories are so good! O man I officially hate time XD |
theotakuprincessofgotham 5/11/12 . chapter 5LoL perfect ending line! Good story |
SummerSmilingSkies 3/26/12 . chapter 4This story is amazing! Please, if it wouldn't be too much trouble, could you do one last chapter? Also I noticed something in your writing and have a way to make it better. You appear to have a lot of unnecessary reapeting words. An example would be, "He raised his fist and Clark grabbed his fist". As you can see, you said fist twice in one sentence. A way to make it better would be to to delete the last fist and say something like, "He raised his fist and Clark grabbed it." I know that my example may be a little plain and a less mature sentence, but putting the same word twice or repeating the same word in three sentences in a row is just something I respectivally advise against. Keep writing, robinskies |
JakeFL 3/25/12 . chapter 5Last line made me laugh. Oh, for future reference, "sue" is the term for a lawsuit. "Sew" is a needle pulling thread (yes, Broadway references always work). Great story. Come check out my fics if you have time. |
DarthZ 3/25/12 . chapter 5YOU BROUGHT HIM BACK!Niw I won't have nightmares :) And I don't like crocodiles either. They've always creeped me out. If you think about it, they're kinda like batman. They wait in the water for something to come, then BAM! The animal is dead. |
Ryuu no Yume 3/25/12 . chapter 5I love the ending! Thanks for the story! |
Reading Nut Cassirole 3/25/12 . chapter 5great story and this chap almost made me cry. i really liked it keep up the good work :) |
cooliochick5 3/25/12 . chapter 5OH MY GLOB, I LUV YOU FOR NOT KILLING ROBIN! LUV THIS STORY |