wow.
surprisingly interesting. hahaha.
at least, both of them won't realize that they were both gay.
and surprisingly..his wife was understanding. hohoho,
i can't wait to see the threesome. haha.

until next time,

mrs. zala

nice...so realistic:..! Please update:..!

I really liked this story. I've read all three parts (the phone call and the christmas one) and I really hope that you continue this some more. I really want to see what happens after they finally get together.

lol what happens next i waent to know

Shindo never shifted from the center of his life describes this fic perfectly.

Thank you for this very interesting story. I have been absolutely enthralled and fascinated with Hikaru no Go and especially with this particular story.

It will be every interesting to see where it will go from here, but I'm looking forward to it, very definitely.

Me encanto la historia, es original.

Siempre he pensado que Akira y Hikaru el uno sin el otro estarian muy solos, sin embargo al ser tan contrarios necesitarian un equilibrio, Natsume es su equilibrio.

Por favor continua la historia, la esperare con ansias con la ayuda del traductor de google.

I rather like the rythm Hikaru has with both Akira and Natsume. And a working (emotional) threesome between them if perfectly fine with me. In fact, in my mind that is where this is going.

Thankyou for posting this.

I'm going to start by doing something I've never done before: praising your OC and her interaction with the characters.

Natsume, with her quiet, unassuming strength, is like the calm sea that by virtue of patiently sliding to and fro with the tide ends up carving the coast. She accepts her lot in life and makes the best of it, and that is always something to admire.

She is also a force of nature; only, where Shindo is a hurricane, or a tsunami or a volcano, she is the tide, the water currents, the mountains.

The bit that sold her to me, however, was the fact that she absolutely no romantic interest in Akira. Sure, they are building a life and possiby a family together, but more as best-friends than soulmates. I love the aromantic-life-partners trope with all my heart, and by god do you do it justice!

Besides that, your Akira and Hikaru and incredibly true to themselves. Hikaru, so oblivious to his own heart; Akira, so steadfast... But Natsume's "It's fine, it's all fine" attitude truly takes the cake and eats it.

I wouldn't be averse to a sequel, if you can find it in your muse to write it up?

nice characterization! I like where you went with the characters. I don't really thing it's that OC, esp. considering that it is a future fic. :) nice work!