This is great! Please post more chapters of this.

That was funny. I just found it. I have been thinking about making a Dungeon Keeper fanfic for the last...4 months, and I think I know what to do now, so I'm gonna start it. It'll be cool...I hope. Umm...yeah...GOOD STORY!

I like the way you portrayed life in the dungeon, and there are some pretty funny bits in there. My only gripe would be the script format... it makes things a bit confusing. I think the story would work a bit better if there was some prose surrounding the dialogue to explain who the characters are and what they are doing.

great story i hope you update it cause it is just soo funny i will be keeping my eye on this story so dont let me down with no updates

pop

I have a little trouble following what's going on, there doesn't seem to be much of a connection between chapters 1 & 2. There are good parts, and some good punches, the story just seems to me a little disorganized, but maybe that's what you're aiming for.

Funny, stupid, interesting... Write on!

LOL- that was really funny, clever and a refreshing take on the DK world. I hope you'll continue this story.

Hey, i liked that story, it makes me want to play DK again.

Great story:) I never thought of writting that kind of story with Dungeon Keeper. Keep it up! Please?

*Celina

Hehehehehhehehe cool... Write some more, would ya? it's actually pretty funny.