Reviews for Within the Apocalypse
zero 6/18/13 . chapter 17
add Yuriko for the harem
wy 6/18/13 . chapter 17
"I'll cross Naruto and make him useless." - Author
bretmccully 6/17/13 . chapter 17
The quote is " I will find you… and I will kill you" from the movie Takenand I think that it could do well as a small Harem
UltimateGundamFighter 6/16/13 . chapter 17
great chapter cant wait to see what happens next and my vote is for a small harem with Rei, Yuuki ,Miyuki , Saeko and Shizuka
Lednacek 6/15/13 . chapter 17
if you plan on getting naruto back to his worl that i would go for single pairing Saeko. None other would understand the world madara showed her.

chapter had huge amount of character with powers beyond normal. i got lost in the fights. too many names. you need to either cut the roster short or be more detailed.
Angels will bleed from pain 6/15/13 . chapter 17
(Tears)
God of the No-Deaths 6/15/13 . chapter 17
naruto saeko only
Otaku97 6/15/13 . chapter 17
Single with saeko
SanguineGravios 6/13/13 . chapter 17
Ughhh cliff hangers, anyway a small harem would be nice.
The First Kitsukage 6/13/13 . chapter 17
I'm a Kage of few words... was a good story... too many unneeded OCs... good luck...
Darksoul2142 6/13/13 . chapter 17
That quote is from Taken. Took me back a bit.
Kuroreisaiga 6/13/13 . chapter 1
Methinks it was Taken...awesome chapter btw
PendekarEmas 6/13/13 . chapter 17
Small Harem consist of 5 girl :P
so Saeko,Shizuka,Rei,Yuuki and MIYUKI
9N1n3-K1tsUnE 6/13/13 . chapter 2
i like naruto was not godlike..and having a solution with every problem coming
SSJ3 Kyuubi Gohan 6/13/13 . chapter 17
Anyone who knows what a meme is would know this quote
"You may be able to get away this time Naruto-kun, but just remember! I will find you… and I will kill you!"

Also small harem.
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