nice sort little fic you got there...i can see areas that need a little bit more work, but, overall, it was a nice little fic...good job

how old is Cyran? 'cause you made him sound older and wiser then i had pictured him...when Cyran said, "We non-Force users really are the majority, aren't we? I hadn't thought of that. I didn't really expect to be able to be trained, but a small part still hoped. I thought maybe you felt better than the rest of us because of your good fortune, but you actually are so compassionate. You actually seem guilty or sad that you can't help me."
he sounded more intelligent then the young child i was picturing...he sound like he was around Obi-Wan's age.

Good start!

I really liked that they talked through the Melida/Daan episode and got to see how the other one was feeling. Very sweet and gentle. Well done.

AW...and what a great explanation for Obi-Wan's long not-quite-but-sort-of mourning for Qui-Gon.

Good start.