| Reviews for Goodbye Mish |
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Laurelizaabeth 3/12/13 . chapter 1What a sweet story! Touched my heart. |
Edhla 12/14/12 . chapter 1This is a nicely written little ficlet. You write confidently and describe well. My only suggestion is that the beginning conversation between the parents seems a little short and lacks detail, and the boys' reaction at the end is a little bit abrupt. It'd be great, I think, if both those scenes were expanded for detail so we can really feel those emotions. Anyway, well done. |