I just cannot stop crying. This was so beautiful , so heartbreaking. Truly AMAZING writing.

Holy crap...that was a rough read. Good but sad.

I saw your warning. I thought I fortified my heart... but I'm still crushed. Oh. I can see why you needed to get this out of your head. It's haunting and beautiful all at the same time.

Well...geez...way to make me cry! It's bizarre to think with all our technology, dying from childbirth still happens. *sniff* Linda xo

That was INTENSE! I really liked it, even though this is & was one of my fears..I believe giving birth is scary but rewarding whatever the 's no way Edward would resent his son(in your fic), they fought way to hard & long for him, and he was conceived out of love.._

Um yeah, probably not the first thing I should have read this morning. I am so happy my baby cave has closed up shop. That shit is scary. In so few words you were able to capture love, determination, fear, physical pain, and heartbreak. I feel so sad for Edward. Will he resent Anthony for the rest of his life?
You should totally listen to birdie's cover of skinny love. That shit will gut you!

Oh my gosh that was so sad! But beautiful! I'm having trouble logging in but when I do I'm definitely adding this to favourites!

I MUST WHISPER YELL THIS TO YOU... SEE HERE'S THE SCOUP I DON'T DO FIC WITH BABIES... LIKE I JUST CAN'T GET INTO IT, PUT A KID ANYWHERE NEAR A FIC I AM READING AND I RUN I CAN'T HELP MYSELF. :) BECUASE OF THIS I MIGHT OF SORTA FIST PUMPED WHEN BELLA BIT IT :) I MEAN SURE THIS MAKES ME INSENSITIVE AND MEAN SPIRITED BUT I KINDA SAY "SEEE THIS IS WHAT YOU GET FOR HAVING A BABY!" OKAY THAT WAS MEAN BUT YOU KNOW I LOVE YOU AND I LOVE YOUR STUFF AND I LOVE EDWARD AND SORTA BELLA EVEN THOUGH THEY TRIED TO PROCREATE... AND YEAH I'M GONNA SHUT UP NOW :)

I wanted to like this, really I did, but the truth is, I’ve read this same basic plot multiple times by many different authors. Besides being proud of the fact that this is poorly written and not beta’d (as if you needed to point that out), you didn’t bring anything new to the table with this recycled plot. Sorry, doll, others have done it better.

Yeah that was me as the anon. . I didn't realize it wouldn't take it. But yeah. I loved the story because it was so emotional.

Good job WOMAN!

Omg I just want to slap your face for making me cry but this was so heart breaking and good

You put so much emotion in this - the love that they shared, the frustration that Bella had and that was just the beginning.

Then you added the difficult birth and then after… OMFG I bawled… BAWLED over this. Immediately, my mind went to the song "Don't Take the Girl" and it ripped me a new one. Yeah this story broke my heart.

This was beautifully written. I think keeping it unbeta'd was good because it needed to be absolutely raw.

Wonderful job wify now hand me some tissue dammit!

that was horrible! Awful! Terrible!

And incredibly well written. Good job!

This just broke my heart. I almost bled out myself when I had my son. It scares me to death to know that not to long ago I wouldn't have made it and I would have never known what it was like to be him mom.

*sobs*

Why Nerdy? Why must you do this to me?

And I did it to myself for being all, YAY GIVE ME ANGST!

My biggest fear walking into the delivery ward for both of my sons was that one of us wouldn't walk out. I was more concerned for them, despite every knowledge, ultrasound, monitor that told me they were okay, I just wasn't going to be okay until I knew for sure.

The worst thing... the *worst* thing... It almost made me not go back for a second. I did hemorrage for my first boy. Scary.

Hubby almost refused a second pregnancy.

This made me cry. An UGLY cry cause' it's too close to home.

Gah.

Thanks for sharing babe!

Kriss (duskri123)