miss gee this is soooooo gooood sooooo very gooood. I had not thought at all that she was claiming to be his wife Angela I presumed it was someone else from his past. You have me hooked and I'm hanging on never to let go. Love that you have brought Darcy into this. Here is hoping that the next instalment is not very far away. As far as I am concerned you are the most talented mentalist fanfic writer.

Btw I am Julie on Brainyreviewer Blog.

What a wonderful opening chapter! The first paragraph caught me - loved the imagery of the cougar being a nag in the final leg of a mental race against a seasoned thoroughbred! How true! Your attention to the little details of Jane's character is wonderful - eg his little tells. Glad that you have Lisbon noticing things as well. So - you have definately hooked me - I'm intruiged to see where you are going to take this.

I was sooo happy to see this story pop up! (I think I'm getting spoiled by your frequent postings; I was worried you had abandoned TM when your last story was not immediately followed by another one!)

This one is off to a fantastic start, as usual. Those recordings are horrendous, and I'm glad Jane hasn't listened to them. Especially in his current only semi-healthy state. This case is going to be interesting, even without that whopper of a surprise you added in at the end. But Debbie's "involvement" with Jane is going to make this story even more exciting. I can't wait for the next update! (I'm very serious)

What a great start to the week to have a new story from Miss Gee. Thank you for that. I enjoyed this chapter, I had figured out that the wife must have something to do with Jane's past but 'husband' was a bit of a surprise. I am looking forward to finding out the story behind that one. You do a wonderful job with keeping Jane is character. Well done and can't wait for the next one. Not sure why this story isn't on the main Mentalist fanfiction page.

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What on earth is going on? Is this woman Angela or a previous wife of Jane?

Terrific start to the fic. I'm very interested to see what happens next :).