Ah this was really nice and eerie! The ending grossed me out Ahah. I've always liked the story of Conchita so this was a nice read. My only critique is that remember, you're writing in the perspective of Conchita, who is absolutely obsessed with food, so I would love to have seen more elaborate description of the smells and tastes of what she ate.

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horrifying

Highly disturbing. I thought i going to lost my lunch. GJ on bringing out the horror of miss Conchita, although i doubt i will read that again _