|Reviews for Of Secrets and Desires|
| Guest 3/20/13 . chapter 8
CONWAY IS THE STALKER ... And what's ping on with misty may and ash
| ShadowAbsol13 3/20/13 . chapter 8
In order of your questions:Drew, Conrad, and when you post the next chapter put an answer section.
Appearence (hair/eye/skin colour):Ginger, green eyes, pale skin
Personality:Really tough and quiet
Pokemon (1-3)*:Furret, Ampharos, Pidgeot
| Heartgirl234 3/18/13 . chapter 8
YES! YOU'VE FINALLY UPDATED. Naw, you didn't lose half us. Some of us are just sorta lazy about logging in or reviewing. Leaf doesn't strike as me as too whiny. She's better than Lea.
And I liked the chapter, but I sorta wished there was some way for us to know the POV before having to really read into it. Just a suggestion, not anything that you need to fix. I'm fine either way to be honest.
Stalker? Umm... Conway? Ursula? Lea? An OC?
Haha, speaking of which, thanks SO much for using Seth!
| Cheep the Hedgehog 1/11/13 . chapter 7
I'm actually going to say I liked it. Not to be all 'Meh' , but I personally thought people like Lea and her cronies are in a LOT of fanfics; well, actually Melody and all of them. I'd like to see a bit more on Leaf(Cuz she's awesome) and if Gary finds her again. Wait, do I hear a roar? Wonder what it is.
| Cutiepiepo2 12/28/12 . chapter 7
more I love this I want to read more and now what happen when leaf kick Lea sorry assets also I want leaf and Gary to get 2 gether and leafs named get cleared and everybody gets her files back and remember her.
| updateee 12/10/12 . chapter 7
| ChaosGirl607 12/10/12 . chapter 7
I squealed when I saw that you finally updated. I've been busy with school work too (curse the people who decided math had to branch out to what won't even probably be used in life) , but reading your story is a very nice break from that, don't you think? :)
Lea is starting to really irk me. She's similiar to Leaf in some aspects (having similar eyes, and leaf leaf), but her personality is like a big can of repellant.
Hmmm, I wonder who the defeated trainers are/ are going to be. Also, I can't help but wonder who is the girl that Ash, May, and Misty ran into. (Call me obsessively curious, but I looked up the OC forms in the reviews, and I couldn't find anyone with a Milotic and purple eyes) Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter! Happy Writing! :D
| Pesky Midnight 12/10/12 . chapter 7
Well took you long enough!
Gary... and Lea you *censored*! (takes branch and nearly bashes her head in) Gary you're next if you don't get your act together and start ignoring Lea!
Well update soon!
| AquaStarlight 12/9/12 . chapter 7
Oh my gosh, you don't know how happy I am to see this update! :D
...Man, I really hate Lea. She's such a liar. XD
And also, there was one part I was confused at. Gary talked about Leaf being trapped in the cave, so he knew about that, right? Then wouldn't he know Lea was the one who caved her in?
| AquaStarlight 10/7/12 . chapter 6
Please update soon, I seriously love this story! You said that next chapter is where it really gets good, so I can't wait for it! I also can't wait for Gary and Leaf to finally meet - OLDRIVALSHIPPING FOR THE WIN! :D
| Pesky Midnight 7/29/12 . chapter 6
Wow, this is pretty cool! But I'm not totally sure about the rules in the tournament. Like how do you get out of the tournament? Like, do the pokemon have to be knocked out or something?
Is it too late to submit an OC?
Name: Kirina Sato
Appearance: light tan, black hair, dark blue eyes
Personality: Cold, quiet, but not necessarily bad. She seems cool and confidant, but can be described as shy by her closest friends. Sometimes mysteriously helps people (ex: leaving a super potion by a good person in the tournament whose pokemon is on the verge of fainting while said person and pokemon are asleep) but keeps her identity anonymous while doing the good deed.
Region: Unova (or whatever else is left. she travels alot, so yeah)
Pokemon: Emolga, Milotic, Skarmory
| Guest 7/15/12 . chapter 6
I really really really like this story so far! The whole hunger games/pokemon theme makes for a great plot! Leaf reminds me of katniss the way she stays in the trees... and her past is interesting. I'm waiting eagerly for the next chapter, "where the fun begins"! I can't wait, and hope you post the next chapter really soon. Keep it up! :) Thanks
| Guest 7/13/12 . chapter 6
I really can't wait for the rest of this story- I love it! It has a cool plot, and I really hope you can update soon thanks! :)
| Guest 7/11/12 . chapter 6
Do the trainers actually kill each other like they do in the 'Hunger Games' or is that still meant to be unknown to us? And I had a suspicion that Leaf and Drew would group up since they battled.
Good chapter :)
| Heartgirl234 7/11/12 . chapter 6
OMG! I love this story! If it's not too late, I'd like to submit an OC. I already worked out the last part of his personality with ChaosGirl607, by the way.
Name: Seth Sharperson
Appearance: black hair hanging over his face/ icy grey eyes/ slight tan
Personality: With a handsome face and the strength, skills, and courage to go with it, many girls have found Seth to be extremely dreamy. But ALL of those girls are discouraged by his usually cold demeanor and loner attitude. Seth is a person EXTREMELY bound to his sense of honor and has a slight hero's complex where he feels the need to help people in danger no matter what (though he does it discreetly as he disdains the spotlight or any attention). He can be very persuasive, but generally does not open up to people to reveal his more fun,warm, and compassionate side. Mysteriously, he has a connection to Sakari somehow; he has a soft spot for her, because she "intrigues" him.
Region: Johto, Blackthorn City