First off, let me thank you for reviewing the first chapter of my little story. Figured I should read & review one of yours, and wow - that was a really good one. Never in my life have I played a bloody roar game, but I feel like I know Uriko and Kenji just as well as anybody else now. Really fantastic - I believe I might even go on to read some of your other fics; you are really talented.

You my dear is someone who is highly talented Nice work, your an excellent author. I'm a friend of Libra's, she told me what that bitch Zeronova had the nerve to say so I just reviewed the bitch and put her ass in her place. God I hate stupid ass fags like her, anyways if anyone bothers you call me and I'll put them where they belong.

That was great! I'm a writer myself, and I loved it! They make such a great couple! Please write more and keep up the great work!

With a great writing skill like this, you should be professional writers...

Love you stories!

I finally found some Kenji/Uriko stories!

That was a cute story. Well written and described just like in the game - I've to admit that it's my first try to read fanfics from games. so I was kinda confused who was Kenji -_-, but anyways, the fic was cute _ Nice work!

eh I don't think this was a very original story. it was rather 'happy lovely fairytale' in nature and I don't think that really fits the characters or Bloody Roar

Your stories ROCK! Theres only one thing I didnt like, the think me a pansy or anything...I just like mature language...and I respect you for how little you put into your story...but it's still there, y'know! Great stories! write alot more! At least write a sequel...and maybe you could try writing stories abour other charactors, too!

I enjoyed this story very much. Without knowing much background, I enjoyed a lot.

(For Part 2) From serenity to danger to serenity again. A quick reversal of fortune that is accomplished masterfully. Your insight into what characters think is formidable. I felt the anguish that went to Uriko as she fought and the relief she felt at the end. All in all, the descriptions and flashbacks merit yet another good show in literary creativity. Keep up the good work. A

Greetings. As well as I can judge, you wrote a fine opening. Good character description. You gave characters life and persuaded your readers into reading more. The description of the surroundings are top-notch and plesant to the eye of a reader. The opening poem reflects what can be possible and what is. Being a new fan of BR series, I enjoy this opening as well as draws me into reading the rest. A

Loved it! you are the best bloody roar author i have ever seen- keep up the good work!

that was great

i vote for a sequel

Great story! _ Loved the Teen Zone scene the best! Hehehe, ok, I'm off to read the sequel now!