don't kill Carly or Gabe! or Ashleigh, for some strange reason she reminds me of...me!

coolio bro!

cool

This has definitely has potential, and I love the premonition. From both a writer and filmmaker's standpoint, I feel as though the description of the deaths could be a little more in detail. They just kind of happen. I do LOVE the idea of a sort of "animal jail break". Play with it a bit, go nuts. I'm excited to see what becomes of it. (Oh, I also love the title. Also excited to see how it ties in.)