| Reviews for Evolution |
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loretta537 6/12/12 . chapter 2this sounds like it will be an interesting story |
Kyrianae Narii 5/5/12 . chapter 2Hi I've read you other story 'broken wands' and liked it well enough to check on your other stories too. Well I found this and I must say it is pretty darn good; you put an interesting twist on the whole go back in time thing. I am, shall I say, intrigued by what you make of this fic, as I think it has great potential. Don't let yourself get down just because not as many people find it as they usually would and review. It is a brilliant story thus far. I hope you continue with this fanfic as it is in fact very interesting. I can't wait to see how you change things. |
Jessiclar 4/1/12 . chapter 2You're evil, you know? I was going to bed, checked my email then had to come and read this. It's interesting, I have to say. The A/N in the middle made me laugh. Super!Harry would kinda be a sort of hell. xD |
Teufel1987 4/1/12 . chapter 2So let me get this straight: All it takes is ONE incident to make such a huge change ... Harry makes a few witty comebacks and suddenly Draco Malfoy is a pariah, Zabini is the top dog and Slytherins are all happy touchy feely "let's sit around a campfire, hold hands and sing 'heal the world'" people ... And Severus Snape, an adult, their teacher and head of house (and Death Eater) actually cares what a bunch of snot nosed pimply faced teenagers think... Oh yes ... If only the real world were like that ... Then all you would have to do to end a war would be to embarrass the head of a nation with a few witticisms and sit back and watch as the whole country's policy, government and laws change overnight... The UN wouldn't even need to have their own peace keeping force then... |
darkplayer35 4/1/12 . chapter 2Interesting start. It has potential. Please update soon. |
sirius009 3/24/12 . chapter 1Fix your summary, nobody is ever going to take you seriously with so many grammar errors. |