hey i was wandering to what happened with chapter one? (your tributes), its just that it doesn't let me read it I really want to... so can you please see if anything is wrong and fix it in the case that it is? Thanks.

Oh no! Poor Gale, any time he tries to tell Katniss something happens. I hope they survive whatever the Gamemakers have planned for them. Can't wait for more.

You are a wonderful person and I am absolutely in love with your writing! I can't wait to read the rest of it!

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Holy freaking crap. Why? WHY? Gale was going to tell Katniss that he loved her. Aagh.
Well the spotlight was a good idea. Can't wait!

And here we are at the climax! Finally!

This is the best fanfiction for Hunger Games I have ever read and I have read many! Honestly, I think is so much better than Suzanne Collins' version of the Hunger Games. Your characterization is spot on, your plot is well developed and your chapters gripping. Why does this not have more reviews? You deserve thousands if not more for this masterpiece!I have read this story about three times today and I've already recommended it to several of my friends. Just...wow. This is amazing! I am speechless! I cannot wait to see what you have install next and I implore you to make a sequel as you had asked about in a few author's notes back.

Cool. More?

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lol update soon

pardon me, for being frank

but, here goes - what you're writing is a bunch of juvenile junk. You could have thought out the plot more carefully - the spectral and depressing quality which made the original novel so good is entirely missing in your work. The actions are not dramatized properly and the language is quite loose

Ooh exciting! I'm dying to know what gale was starting to say! Great job, please update soon!:)

Wow great chapter! Please update sooner if possible. I can't wait to get to the climax!

This is a great story. I really like it!

awesome! please update soon!