I loved it. Thank You. Sara.

This was really cool. Just thought you should know!

Wow this was so good! I've been flipping back and forth through so many different stories these past few months, but I just had to finish yours and I'm glad I did.

I don't think they would work at NCIS. Their respective childhoods are what lead them to be at NCIS. Based on your story Tony would be a pilot, Ziva a dancer, and while Tim would be working with computers he would not be at NCIS. So most likely building robots. I've fallen in love with your story and it reminds me of when I was a kid. I bet it reminds some of the readers of when they were children or of their children. I'm much to young for children but it reminds me of my childhood. I remember how excited I was to have learned to tie my shoes. Thank you for bringing back those beautiful memories of my childhood with your story.

Allergies?

Well if they are like in your AU story their parents and Sarah McGee will have to know.

CUTENESS

Timmy is cute. Tony and Ziva are as expected. Yup I definately found the It story.

Funny but I read the Abby scene just as quick pace as she does it. By the way I finally found the Team as kid fic I was looking for. I hope.

This story was very good glad I read it

i really liked your story, please keep up the great work.

Tony wouldn't have been this badly behaved.. His parents were really strict and I'm sure Tony would have had manners, polite etc..

If you happen to do another couple stories on them growing up that they do get to do what they wanted to do growing up, like Ziva becomes a dancer, Tony joins the Air Force or becomes a Navy fighter pilot and Tim does what he wants to build robots or what ever techie stuff.

Funny how it's like only Tony getting punished all the time even if Ziva starts things with him.. Just like in the show, Ziva and Tim always against Tony.. Tony teases but those two are terrible to Tony, always putting him down etc.. Hope season 10 changes and Tony's more like he was when he led the team when Gibbs was gone.. Loved that Tony with Jeanne he rocked..

whoa, chapter 16 totally freaked me the hell out.