|Reviews for Ring of Guilt|
| R3iga1004 5/16/13 . chapter 18
wow this is sure a hit for me my second paring here
daryl and tsugumi is very cute ! when their first see each other
owhhh shu and inori my love for guilty crown
till next time
owhh the up and down i hope that each of them turn out different a third chance to have a family of their own.
tq for your hard work
| RTNknight 5/4/13 . chapter 18
Ok, time to leave a review after secretly reading this fic for a long while.
This is the best GC fanfic in term of writing style (prose grammar) and, well, your Dargumi stuff. Their romantic interaction seemed funny yet interesting!
Though there's something I'm concerned, your AyasexShu (I got this feeling since the first chapter XD). Although I'm not a fan of this pair, I still eager to see interaction between these two mostly due to your writing style. However, there wasn't that much moment/event/whatsoever flag about them as more chapters progressed. I understand that it's your 2nd pair but they really need more steady flags to become acceptable.
All in all, this is a good fic. Just show some more AyasexShu flags already if you really intend to go for it.
| Saint River 2.0 3/17/13 . chapter 18
That scene where Angel Twelve is talking to Inori and Ryo is, in my opinion, the best part of this chapter. It gives focus on Angel Twelve's personality and her person. I love the concept of the 12 Angels being sisters with Inori being the eldest and Twelve being the youngest. Will Inori be able to take charge of her sisters and 'save' them?
And Ryo, I should have said this in the chapter was official introduced as the kid from eight years ago but I'm happy to see he is being made use of. I like fics that give limelight and roles to character who were meant to simply be side, one-time characters. That scene he had with Angel Twelve is fuel for shipping. Just saying
And Arisa finally appears and it seems she's with the enemy. I look forward to the next chapter. I want to know more about the Pallbearers.
| Saint River 2.0 3/17/13 . chapter 17
Angel One is Inori... that was expected. So far Angel Two, Three, Four, Six, Seven, Eight, Nine and Twelve have been revealed. That just leaves Angel Five, Ten and Eleven.
I wonder how Tsugumi is going set things right.
I probably should have said this last chapter but glad to see Inori talking again. You just love to torture Jessica, don't you? And did Tsugumi and Daryl have sex? About time if yes.
| Saint River 2.0 3/17/13 . chapter 16
I didn't expect those 'Angels' to be battle ready so soon. But I like it. They have their personalities from the looks of it and are different from Inori in terms of both appearance and personality. I'm eager to see what they'll do next.
Oohhh... Jessica, what did you do?
| Saint River 2.0 3/17/13 . chapter 15
This is like, what, the fourth time Jessica has had something bad happened to her. Oh well, I'm not really complaining.
Twelve more Inori's? Now that's interesting.
| Saint River 2.0 3/17/13 . chapter 14
Yup, there it is. Character development for Ryo. Glad to see Ryo is just in it for killing Daryl, not the whole 'destroy the world and recreate it' agenda, not that I'm rooting for him to kill Daryl. And here we get to see the Voids of Ryo and Jessica.
| Saint River 2.0 3/17/13 . chapter 13
You just seem to enjoy having one ailment after the other being inflicted on Jessica, don't you?
Inori's return was most unexpected but also most welcomed.
| Saint River 2.0 3/17/13 . chapter 12
Seeing an OCs parent having a full conversation with one of the canon characters is a rare sight for me. I appreciate that. The Pallbearers follow them to the US. Well at least, Daryl and Ayase get to have some competition with each other.
| Saint River 2.0 3/17/13 . chapter 11
Haha. I always loved that "I'm watching you" finger motion. Yup, in the world of anime, kids or teenagers do things that should have been done by adults a lot better. In this case, those 'kids' have grown up.
| Saint River 2.0 3/17/13 . chapter 10
Yahiro joins the group. Good. But I was hoping Souta and Kanon would be here too. Daryl's calling of Jessica as "Brat" never gets old. Apocalypse Team? I prefer Team Apocalypse. Haha.
| Saint River 2.0 3/17/13 . chapter 9
It's good that Ayase and Daryl are starting to get along. Jessica is now probably going to need glasses though. Hehe.
| Saint River 2.0 3/17/13 . chapter 8
So Shu can see if he pilots and Endlave? Nice work. What happened to Jessica... Makes me wonder just what will happen to her.
| Saint River 2.0 3/17/13 . chapter 7
Nice to see Daryl and Tsugumi bonding and Ayase is still suspicious of Daryl.
Glad to see Ryo is on par with Daryl. I have a feeling he won't just be someone who'll constantly fight Daryl using Endlaves though.
| Saint River 2.0 3/17/13 . chapter 6
Ryo. Unless I'm mistaken, he was the little boy in episode 2 whose mother and father were killed by GHQ. The former being personally executed by Daryl. I smell a confrontation.