Reviews for Orphans
destrochao 2/27/13 . chapter 20
Your story is one of the few that make it into my favorites.
zero123456123456 1/14/13 . chapter 1
You should make a 2nd season for this
werewolf234 1/9/13 . chapter 5
At this point, I just started reading, but I really dislike the mistress, thats what happens to many orphanages and its kind of sad
Opinr 10/31/12 . chapter 41
I'm really enjoying this so far I noteced several mistakes in the story refances to Tsukune having a bioloical dad, pokemon cards pre 1950 and humans using bows post 1930 but all in all a enjoyable read and im looking forward to more, good luck and may pineapples never eat your chips!
Akua-Shuzen 8/25/12 . chapter 41
I love your story, I hate to see the further adventures of Tsukune now he is at school. Wait for the next chapter.
Angelo Inferno 8/25/12 . chapter 41
Ahh, so we're back to where school starts for everyone. Poor Tsukune, Akasha may have ended up causing him more pain than relief from her design of the seal personality.
Naitosutoka Eien No Honoo 8/24/12 . chapter 41
alright this is gonna be good
Guest 8/23/12 . chapter 40
Damn, Tsukune should just kill Issa.
Naitosutoka Eien No Honoo 8/23/12 . chapter 40
i hope that this story will keep going i want to know what is going to happene but that is sad still can't wait for the next ch
Grimjowx 8/22/12 . chapter 40
I find the Tsukune and Akasha had given up so early. Neither tried to find a way to stay together. I mean here is a simple solution: Tsukune kills Issa when Tsukune returned. Oh my... isn't there the Kyuubi's help too? I mean... here we had Issa on the ground being pumbled... oh there are swords in the castle... *swing* goes the sword and a certain ballooned, egotistical head gets lopped off. OH MY! Tsukune takes over the castle with the KYUUBI! Kyuubi gains a shelter where she can return to from her adventures outside yeah! No more statuary rape too! WHoa! Akasha can stay with Tsukune, the not soo mary sue character in this situation. The family gets to live with bastard child and blood daughter.

And happy ending my rear end! This isn't happy at all with Akasha's death already.
Grimjowx 8/22/12 . chapter 39
Tsukune sincerely forgave them... after all that crap
altenativefuturefan27 8/22/12 . chapter 40
this is the end?
valash122 8/22/12 . chapter 40
i got tears in my eyes! ( your freaking awesome!
Naitosutoka Eien No Honoo 8/21/12 . chapter 37
wow that is that good or bad oh this is gonna be good
decithe7thsin 8/21/12 . chapter 37
I love you and hate you at the same time. You just stabbed me in the heart after burning my dreams alive with this chapter. It was so good and yet so inherintly. Evil at the same time that it works. Keep up the good work,this is one of my favorite fics in a long time
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