Amazing story.

Aww. What a wonderful story. Thank you

And for the record, I'm getting a total kick out of rjt040190's comments! She's having as much fun as I am.

Did I mention that I enjoy reading an Eliot who's the calm, stable, centered one? Some fics write him as slightly hick-ish; you've kept his accent, but made him downright wise. I like that.

Dialogue done right. As always.

"Reality is a bollocks loving bitch." Seriously? I'm having that printed on a t-shirt.

And while this story could end perfectly right here, I do hope it doesn't.

Loved this story. Don't usually review just because I down load stories at work and take them home to read and just never go back to the page. However, wanted you to know how much I enjoyed it. Down loaded and read the story Monday and last night started re-reading it. Congratulations on a job well done.! Jerrie

Aaaaaaahhhhhhhh! The L word! :)) love this chapter! And twin girls? That's great! Pls continue! I love ur fic :)-M

I love this story! I'm not typically an Elphie girl; I love Parker shipped with him more. Your story, however, brought this pairing to life in such a way that I couldn't stop reading. You really captured their personalities, and I could see this happening in the Leverage universe. The only problem I have is that the ending seems a bit rushed, but that's minor in comparison to the rest of the awesomeness!

So , so good! Loved this!
Thanks,
Mercedes

Aww that was so sweet - a lovely if unorthadox happy family :)

I'm glad you were able to tie up the end of the story with all the areas you covered. Thanks for sharing this fun story. -tvj12

congrats to the happy couple! love the names, too. i can just picture eliot with his little girls. :) so glad they finally admitted their feelings, too. *happy*happy*

This was an amazing chapter and is it the end of the story, if it was it is a great ending

Haha I love the way you wrote Sophie in this chapter. It was genius, funny, and entertaining!
Is there gonna be another chapter? ;ooo

Great story and nice ending. Hope to see more stories from you in the future.

1. When he woke up and she FINALLY told him that she loved him, I cried like a little girl.
2. It was so funny: she was planning to staple his p**** to the wall... hahahaaaaaaaaaaaa
3. Eliot being all jealous was SOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!

*Sighs*

This has been a wonderful, wonderful ride. Thank u for sharing this ..

I cant wait to read chap 2 of your other S/E story!
i bet that i am going to love it just as much..
:DD

rjt040190

p.s.

this put a move on my heart and made me cry like a little girl:

Lost him before she'd had a chance to tell him that he'd given her more than she ever expected. More than she deserved.