|Reviews for Flatline|
| KuruKecleon 5/9/13 . chapter 28
Wow tantilla, I never expected you to change my mind on a pairing in one story. Before I read this I read danger zone, got hooked with kulutoro. Then I read THIS magnificent story, and now hate kulutoro and love zorutoro. You are freaking good at this, hope to read more.
| PunkZebra123 2/3/13 . chapter 9
This is fucking hillarious. The cursing makes it seem so funny. Great stroy. i laughed alot
| matilda410 11/20/12 . chapter 14
Oh, but the fluff is so nice XD. I love this story! Awesome job!
| Guest 11/11/12 . chapter 28
i found alot of errors throgh out the whole book...
| Lightningsphere 11/7/12 . chapter 1
Wow... I love this story... Like, a lot... XD It's so AWESOME!
| Idellechi 10/3/12 . chapter 28
An epic ending. Oh wow, if you wrote a real book that would rock!
| G66XD66 10/2/12 . chapter 28
So, it's finally over. I'm gonna miss this story, and your other Sgt Frog stuff, but I had a feeling You'd be moving on from the fandom soon XD
This was a good final chapter, just sort of showing the final mental stage of being a rape victim, because it's common for them to sort of 'miss' the rapist. A sad one, as it seems Tororo has actually accepted thzt Kururu had 'helped' him get stronger, but at least he was happy at the end
I only have one question... how did Zoruru get his metal limbs re-attached? XD
last thing... good luck with writing and publishing a book, you'll have to tell me about it, and how it goes!
| AsturaMaee 10/2/12 . chapter 28
... omg. this. i cant
| Latios381 9/29/12 . chapter 27
I missed this story! Finally this story's Kururu is dead! That was not unexpected though.
You don't have to update "crap" if you don't want to, no one's rushing you. :) By the way, it's not crappy, it's still awesome!
| Idellechi 9/28/12 . chapter 25
Kagamine Rin's song Meltdown (aka Nuclear Reactor) totalllyyyyy fits this story!
| NewRecruitTororo 9/25/12 . chapter 1
Huh... what is this thing.
Why is it about me and Zoruru...? Why is there a slash between our names...? Why is the genre romance...
| Thatche 9/23/12 . chapter 5
im writing/reading on a mobile device so its taking hours to read 5 damn chapters this story is good love the Tororo shouting PISS OFF at Zororo :D Aand the
way Zororo got into such an odd position with the little tadpole :]
| Idellechi 9/23/12 . chapter 27
So not the ending I expected- but that's what made this epic!
Just wow. I'm like totally speechless right now! So glad you continued this!
Damnit why am I so happy when this chapters so sad? I get the same reaction from you as when I read some of Poe's stories! Yes, I am comparing you to one of the best horror authors of all time, that's how much you rock! Keep writing, I'm so anxious to see how this turns out!
| G66XD66 9/23/12 . chapter 27
You're alive! *glomp*
Srsly I lieave this page for one second to do something and BAM you're back from the dead XD
I suppose this chapter was a little shorter than the others, but I personally thought it was great and that it worked. I didn't really expect Tororo to kill him, though when it happened I thought it was the only way it could have happened.
Kururu was a nutter right to the end XD
Of course I'm anticipating the next bit. No rush ;D
| CyborgAssassinZRR-X1 9/16/12 . chapter 1
OMG loveeee this story! I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE the doroGiro! adn i love the line "so deeply in love that it was disgusting to be in the same room" I LOVE that part! XD, and i thought it was soooo cute when Giroro sunggled with Dororo when he was in the hospital, it made me heart flutter XD i love any love story with Zoruru, or DoroGiro!