| Reviews for Flatline |
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KuruKecleon 5/9/13 . chapter 28Wow tantilla, I never expected you to change my mind on a pairing in one story. Before I read this I read danger zone, got hooked with kulutoro. Then I read THIS magnificent story, and now hate kulutoro and love zorutoro. You are freaking good at this, hope to read more. -Kurukecleon |
PunkZebra123 2/3/13 . chapter 9This is fucking hillarious. The cursing makes it seem so funny. Great stroy. i laughed alot |
matilda410 11/20/12 . chapter 14Oh, but the fluff is so nice XD. I love this story! Awesome job! |
Guest 11/11/12 . chapter 28 i found alot of errors throgh out the whole book... |
Lightningsphere 11/7/12 . chapter 1Wow... I love this story... Like, a lot... XD It's so AWESOME! |
Idellechi 10/3/12 . chapter 28An epic ending. Oh wow, if you wrote a real book that would rock! |
G66XD66 10/2/12 . chapter 28So, it's finally over. I'm gonna miss this story, and your other Sgt Frog stuff, but I had a feeling You'd be moving on from the fandom soon XD This was a good final chapter, just sort of showing the final mental stage of being a rape victim, because it's common for them to sort of 'miss' the rapist. A sad one, as it seems Tororo has actually accepted thzt Kururu had 'helped' him get stronger, but at least he was happy at the end I only have one question... how did Zoruru get his metal limbs re-attached? XD last thing... good luck with writing and publishing a book, you'll have to tell me about it, and how it goes! |
AsturaMaee 10/2/12 . chapter 28... omg. this. i cant |
Latios381 9/29/12 . chapter 27I missed this story! Finally this story's Kururu is dead! That was not unexpected though. You don't have to update "crap" if you don't want to, no one's rushing you. :) By the way, it's not crappy, it's still awesome! |
Idellechi 9/28/12 . chapter 25Kagamine Rin's song Meltdown (aka Nuclear Reactor) totalllyyyyy fits this story! |
NewRecruitTororo 9/25/12 . chapter 1 Huh... what is this thing. Why is it about me and Zoruru...? Why is there a slash between our names...? Why is the genre romance... |
Thatche 9/23/12 . chapter 5im writing/reading on a mobile device so its taking hours to read 5 damn chapters this story is good love the Tororo shouting PISS OFF at Zororo :D Aand the way Zororo got into such an odd position with the little tadpole :] |
Idellechi 9/23/12 . chapter 27So not the ending I expected- but that's what made this epic! Just wow. I'm like totally speechless right now! So glad you continued this! Damnit why am I so happy when this chapters so sad? I get the same reaction from you as when I read some of Poe's stories! Yes, I am comparing you to one of the best horror authors of all time, that's how much you rock! Keep writing, I'm so anxious to see how this turns out! |
G66XD66 9/23/12 . chapter 27... :3 You're alive! *glomp* Srsly I lieave this page for one second to do something and BAM you're back from the dead XD I suppose this chapter was a little shorter than the others, but I personally thought it was great and that it worked. I didn't really expect Tororo to kill him, though when it happened I thought it was the only way it could have happened. Kururu was a nutter right to the end XD Of course I'm anticipating the next bit. No rush ;D |
CyborgAssassinZRR-X1 9/16/12 . chapter 1OMG loveeee this story! I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE the doroGiro! adn i love the line "so deeply in love that it was disgusting to be in the same room" I LOVE that part! XD, and i thought it was soooo cute when Giroro sunggled with Dororo when he was in the hospital, it made me heart flutter XD i love any love story with Zoruru, or DoroGiro! good job! |