|Reviews for The Fifth Commandment|
| FrankieB 8/24/12 . chapter 15
Such a tender, sweet, respectful, gentle, loving and fun relationship you have given them. My, my.. I enjoyed it immensely. I'm sorry it's over, but it ended perfectly. Oh yeah (hehe) I thought the crime story was well thought out and executed very well.
| insubordinationfreak 7/1/12 . chapter 15
How did I miss the last chapter of this? It was so sweet, and I like the pace of the relationship. They really need this in their lives - twice a week no less - I love how Goren manipulated that.
The kissing of the wounds and the hands around the waist were just perfect, as was Goren covered in breadcrumbs. I love that he smuggled curry into her.
Favourite line: "Curry and I have irreconcilable differences" (though the baseball bat was a close second).
Thanks for another fascinating story. Can't wait for your next one.
| rindy713 6/27/12 . chapter 15
that was so cute! i loved it! i am proud of bobby for doing such a great job with the weekly dinner date idea - and expanding the plan so quickly. what a fun story this was!
| sell 6/26/12 . chapter 15
O quê, chegou ao fim? NÂÂÂÂO! Está certo, foi muito legal,a parte da investigação foi como um dos episódios da TV mas o final...Qual de nós, fãs de CI não iria gostar que realmente tivesse acontecido? Bem, o episódio final da temporada 10, com Bobby e Alex se entreolhando e simplesmente indo embora dentro da SUV ao pôr-do-sol faz a imaginação voar não? Será que pode escrever outra fic ( longa,ok?)pós temporada 10? Espero ansiosa !Até a próxima!
PS. Não comentei até agora porque eu sou anônima e parece que você não aceitava comentários anô sempre português quando for ler meu comentário,sim, pois sou entrar em seu perfil e ler outras fics. Vou tentar comentar a todas ok? Só vai demorar um pouco pois no momento estou no perfil de outro autor.
| JustBecause2012 6/25/12 . chapter 15
A very sweet ending to a very enjoyable story. Thank you very much for writing and keeping Bobby and Alex "alive" now that the show has ended. Looking forward to your next story (hehehe)...hint, hint. :)
| dh2930 6/25/12 . chapter 15
Perfect ending to a wonderful story. I like their dinner plans every week, unless Mom intervenes. Movies, museums, concerts...sounds like real grown up dating to me. Yay! Nice to see Frannie and Ron are going to finally pull together, and that no one seems to care about Mark the Shark.
Especially nice that Bobby's handsome face is getting back to normal. Thank you for the fun read.
| leftyred 6/25/12 . chapter 15
This story was a good combo of crime story and romance. Thanks for writing.
| sgrfan 6/25/12 . chapter 15
Enjoyed the story
| CIandSVUcrazy 6/25/12 . chapter 15
That was such an adorable ending - absolutely perfect!
| Rubyray7777 6/25/12 . chapter 15
This is good! Maybe a sequek to see where it goes?...Thanks for the story!
| spacekitten2700 6/21/12 . chapter 14
| rindy713 6/20/12 . chapter 14
very nice work! a well-done interrogation scene. i can definitely see him confessing and protecting his wife after being put through bobby and alex's emotional wringer.
| dh2930 6/19/12 . chapter 14
What a fun chapter. Well, not for Ackerman, but for me. I love their interrogations. Bobby's clumsy act is a sure thing, it always throws off the suspect and the lawyer. I like watching the perfect dance Bobby and Alex do, exchanging the looks, and who leads back and forth.
I don't agree with Ackerman's actions, but you have to admit that wanting to get out of your mother-in-law's spare room is a powerful motive. Somehow it seems to make him a bit more sympathetic.
| insubordinationfreak 6/18/12 . chapter 14
Final nterrogations ('arias' as CI producers call them) are always my favourite scenes in the show or in fan fic. This one was masterful, and you should be really proud of writing it so succintly and brilliantly.
They are such an awesome partnership here - on fire. The collision, the mother-in-law spare room angle, Eames counting off Ackerman's shortcomings on her fingers and then ordering him to stay in his seat...
I can really see this crime going down just the way you wrote it. He got away with it once and got greedy, just so he could escape from his failures.
I'm glad you didn't forget about Robert Winter and his family. Having Eames call her mother rather than beating her own chest in triumph was poignant. Awesome case!
| CIandSVUcrazy 6/18/12 . chapter 14
Great chapter - I loved their interrogation tactics!