| Reviews for Dragon Ball Yōkai |
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Ron 5/18/13 . chapter 17 Great story. I like how you combined both universes. The only thing I noticed and it didn't ruin the story were spelling errors. I hope to see more. |
Rosco Peeko Trane 3/15/13 . chapter 8Okami and Tenshi huh? Well that explains A LOT about when you said that Goku's SSJ4 might not be enough. |
Rosco Peeko Trane 3/15/13 . chapter 5Pretty confident that Krillin could beat the crap out of anyone in RV(aside from maybe Alucard but base form Goku could definitely kill him) so I'm looking forward to whatever messed up plot twist you decide to include to combat against Goku because there's no way anyone will be able to actually be able to even hurt Goku if he was asleep let alone actually fighting against them. |
Rosco Peeko Trane 3/15/13 . chapter 4Good thing you made Moka more forward with her emotions, otherwise a relationship between the two wouldn't go ANYWHERE considering how oblivious they can both be, especially Goku. XD I'm curious to see what you've done with the whole newspaper club thing though considering how Goku can't even read, let alone write haha. |
Rosco Peeko Trane 3/15/13 . chapter 3I would assume that Goku's fear of needles might be triggered at the thought of her teeth going into him and he start running and screaming lmao. But I also understand that such a thing would likely throw a huge wrench into the plot so it's perfectly understandable this way . |
Rosco Peeko Trane 3/15/13 . chapter 1LOL nice one with the Roshi bit and especially that little bit with King Kai, ingeniously accurate to their characters in my opinion. Looking forward to more. :) |
Guest 3/13/13 . chapter 17 awesome! hope you do next chapter. |
animeandmangafangirl 1/27/13 . chapter 17great story! what happen when bulla brought home her boyfriend! i wanted to know what happened -_- please update soon |
animeandmangafangirl 1/27/13 . chapter 10XD THE ENDING WAS AWESOME! POOR GOKU IS GOING TO FACE A VAMPIRE WOMAN WRATH! |
kentho t 1/27/13 . chapter 16genial historia |
Lord Mortensen 1/24/13 . chapter 17awesome! please update soon! |
Wavern 1/16/13 . chapter 17 Good story. Please Update Soon. To: lostsoldierS636 This story takes place 7 YEARS after the defeat of the Shadow Dragons. In this story, Goku left with Shenron and came back after 7 YEARS. In GT, Goku WAS NOT turned into an adult again after the defeat of the Dragons. He left with Shenron and when he returned to Earth, a 100 YEARS had passed. That's why he was an adult. It was 100 YEARS after the defeat of the Shadow Dragons. Obviously, Goku grew up again. This story takes place 7 years after GT ended, NOT 100 years. That's why Goku is still a teen. Update Story Soon. |
lostsoldierS636 1/16/13 . chapter 10Someone is peeved. |
lostsoldierS636 1/16/13 . chapter 6*Reading Goku solving a complicated math problem that I couldn't have a chance in hell of doing* O_O Besides that nice job |
lostsoldierS636 1/16/13 . chapter 1First of all: At the end of GT he was turned back into an adult Second: Chi Chi dies?! NOOOOOOO! Saddest Prolouge ever. *SIGH* At least Vegeta's still in the mix. Also if you are continuing this, could you have Chi Chi and anyone else who dies have a good afterlife by hanging out with King Kai? Great now I'm depressed all because of a stupid opening. Oh well live and learn. |