|Reviews for the boys of summer|
| xxTemarixx 8/11/12 . chapter 1
I never reviewed this so I am going to do so now. I really love how when you write from Akaya's perspective because you do it so well!
I like how the first one seems so casual then it gets a bit deeper. Of course Akaya compares everything to Yukimura. XD
For the second one, I can believe that's what Akaya was probably thinking during that match. Poor him, he never gets to really do that. :(
Lots of comparing and contrasting going on here, it suits you. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
| Erigay 4/5/12 . chapter 1
"But Niou's stupid, so what does he know."
Loved that part. Especially the immediately-following part. Where he admits Niou's wit and cunning, but still thinks he's stupid anyway.
Ah, cute cute Kirihara.
The Kirihara Zone would be something to look forward to, alright.
His awe from the match was also something I liked. :)
Looking forward to the next chapters! :D
| aozora ekusutashii 3/31/12 . chapter 1
You need more reviews for this one. o3o I sincerely hope you're doing well for your mid-terms (:
I like this story already. Rikkai totally should have been the main school for PoT - Its characters and their personalities are just so fun to write :D
Akaya's perspective seems to be all rough-and-tumble, I believe D But his weak side has been exploited through Yukimura's absence. I enjoyed reading how you captured that
(Maybe there could be a Sanada perspective-like thing where he recalls seeing his best friend/captain collapse? :3)
Hope to see this updated (after 250 Dark Stars, of course)! :D
| Queen - K i r e i 3/28/12 . chapter 1
This is truly interesting!
I mean, Rikkai is my favorite team EVER! And Akaya is simply adorable :D The Kirihara zone thing made me laugh, because that's definitely something he would say.
And Seigaku sucks. Sorry, but I had to say it. xD
Oh, and an audience? That's how you say in spanish go to courts, conduct a case, bring a complaint, etc (I had a divorce last monday). But I don't know if that's the right word in english haha, I mean, my most vivid remember of U.S law system is from "Legally blonde", so...
Thanks for sharing this! I'll be waiting for more :D. Especially, perspectives from Yukimura and Niou!
| Slytherin Studios 3/26/12 . chapter 1
Nicely done, can't wait for the next chapter.