I am really intrigued! :P I like the characterisation...can't wait to see more. ;)

I'm enjoying your story so far! (mama bear Mako, hahaha...) Can't wait to read more!

Aww, I love this so far! Update soon.

You have a good grip of the characters for there only being two episodes released. The dialogue flows so easily. I'd hope you wouldn't stop writing fanfiction you're really good at it, but I totally understand the whole destroying your life thing. Anyway back to the story, I like it, a lot. This is the first Mako Korra I've read and I've gotta say you might have me hooked.

:O! This is such a good story so far! In the first chapter, you said this would be your last fic. Please keep writing Makorra!

When I first read chapter 1, I thought this was a neat oneshot about Korra and Mako. The characterizations were very believable.

And then you post chapter 2 and I'm hooked. Your writing is clear and interesting and I really really enjoyed reading your fic. There aren't many LOK fics out there now and there's even less quality ones. Though Mako is brooding here, he isn't angsty- thanks for that. Slammin' job so far, If the beginning chapters are anything to go by, the rest will be great as well. I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for this!

OoOoOooOoOoOOooooh magically goooood writing! Love it!