|Reviews for Like a Spike Through the Heart|
| spike'smate 4/11/13 . chapter 7
good story but update soonest u havent updated since 3/26/12
| MaireAilbhe 11/17/12 . chapter 7
Wow. This was incredible. I want to read it 3 more times just to absorb the details.
| spike'smate 10/25/12 . chapter 6
| spike'smate 9/25/12 . chapter 5
looking like a really good story update soonest please
| watcher125 6/12/12 . chapter 4
What a twist!
But i can see Drusilla singing that words right now. I think it can be crazy enough for her. Thank you very much. And please continue, of course.
| MaireAilbhe 6/11/12 . chapter 5
Another amazing chapter!
| Waspeater 4/30/12 . chapter 4
Really enjoying this! I'm especially impressed that you can write believably for Spike both with and without a soul. Lots of people downplay how evil he is pre-chip/soul but you've kept the monster.
I also like your Dru, properly deranged and playful.
It'll be interesting to see if Dru really wants a soul or if it's just a ploy to get close to Spike (and friends?). Are you going to go into details of what she's been up to since "Crush"?
Constructive criticism:- It might be a bit far-fetched that both the slayer and the mother manage to miss that Spike is a vampire. When he's unconscious he won't be breathing, when the mother's doing the first aid she should notice he doesn't have a pulse. The usual reasons given for Buffy not noticing Angel is a vamp is that she has unusually crappy slayer-sense and that the hellmouth "jams the signal". Does any of that apply to the chinese slayer?
Technical point:- It's canon that Cecily is the same character as Halfrek the vengeance demon (it's never made clear if Cecily was her original identity or just a 'cover'). You might want to label this as minor AU.
| MaireAilbhe 4/8/12 . chapter 4
Such a powerful chapter! Excellent!
| MaireAilbhe 4/1/12 . chapter 2
These first two chapters are amazing! Definitely loving this story!