|Reviews for A Child Distracted|
| Yomi Dead Master 6/4/13 . chapter 1
A wonderful short story! You described things nicely and in great detail, perfectly mimicking the atmosphere of Siren! I also loved the sad twist at the end; it was nicely done and really caught me by surprise.
Overall, a nicely done story! Great job!
| IngridSarah 6/8/12 . chapter 1
This was really great! I loved "This wardrobe smells damp. Like a branch in the rain" especially: it's a good way to convey the fuzzy border between inside and outside in FS.
| princey in a tree 5/18/12 . chapter 1
Oh wow, this was great. Especially the twist of the shibito being the narrator's mother. And I think you captured the atmosphere of Siren perfectly in your descriptions.