|Reviews for Heir to Chaos|
| Lotusbitch 4/13/13 . chapter 24
Welcome Back Nasa *huggles* I was starting to wonder if you were gone with the wind along with your story. But now that your back, I’m happy and relieved that it is still alive now lol
Yeul really almost got herself killed wandering all by herself alone. To be honest, I enjoyed reading her struggling to her surviving while suffering in her own distress for help compared to her being Chaos Yeul in XIII-2. So that pretty much satisfies my need to see her get a little punishment for being creepy and antagonizing and all XD
Glad to see that Caius has stepped in to save Light’s life once again. Wonder who this heir to chaos will be who is suppose to save humanity. I would like to see Light fight against her destiny and Caius with her own goals.
| i 4/9/13 . chapter 24
Nirriane, I'm so glad you are back! So relieved. I'm really sorry about your sickness but I guess you are alright now, aren't you? You are strong I have no doupt about it:)
An here...we have an amazingly big chapter of Heir To Chaos which I presume is the true beginning of everything.
Yeul's efforts to escape from the Gaul had being wriiten in such a good way that after each sentence, honestly, my heart was pouching faster and stronger! Filled of suspence!
And look what made me the most impression; Caius arrves at the very end (which meant that both Yeul and Light could be dead) but still...and here comes the best part...he seemed to forget about Yeul and concentrate only on Light!
He never asked how this happened, why, or what was wrong with Yeul anyway? No! He followed Lightning and tried his best (well, he still tries) to make her recover, while Valhalla is calling for their son to death. And...wait a minute...is Caius taking the venom for himself, to save Light? Is that suppose to mean that Caius is going to get infected and die either by Noel, either by the stupid poison? DONT TELL ME THAT! NO HAPPY FAMILY IN THE END!:(
But! Surely we can't know about the rest of the story. It's up to you to give us the end of it (which I hope it wont come so soon...). Really the story now gets a dangerous twist for both Caius and Lightning. Who is their enemy? Who should they fight at the end to get their freedom ? And, will Light ever fall in love with him?
I can't wait to see!
*About some news, about Versus especially...some think that...Noctis is going to be a girl in the final game. But I personnally want to doupt about this one. Terrible news, huh?* :)
Kisses and be healthy:)
| Cascade00 4/8/13 . chapter 24
I'm really nervous about Yuel one moment you think she's out to get lightning and then the next she's not. Which is it! Seriously I think when I find out that's going to be a shocker. Lightning seems to start having a difficult time with her body since she's developing do you think in the next chapter you might be telling us what the baby name is or will that be for later? If you don't have a name I recommend this one Kazuki meaning one's hope. I thought that would fit as Lightning and Cauis son's name but anyways love the chapter I'm happy that Cauis is back! Hopefully well see some more scenes of him and Lightning!
| Tsukiyomi Moto 3/17/13 . chapter 23
Once again, the mindfuckery is RAMPANT. XD
| Tsukiyomi Moto 3/17/13 . chapter 13
THIS WHOLE STORY IS ONE BIG MINDFUCK! -scratches head- I adore it- but- GRAH its just- I don't know how to explain it! But it's awsome.
| i 1/21/13 . chapter 23
Hey, hey! Nice to see you again! This chapter was, for me at least, sudden, and a wonderful surprise! In my misery...:( Forgive those words, but I'm sick and stay in bed for a coupld of days but...we will see. Your story made me feel better, thank you so much:)
Now I realised what you meant; big things are coming! First, Seah and Noel are so close to make a cross-over with the couple...my...I can imagine Light's face what she sees Serah, and Noel's when he realises what Caius has done!
Most impressive, for me, are the truths spoke by Yeul and Caius in the last scene; Caius trully loves Light, and did everything for a family. He doesn't necessarily want to save Yeul only, so we can give an answer to Light's question, huh? I strongly believe she wont be abandoned, and if I have understood right, she will love Caius, but in the end they won't be together. Or at least I think, that's the truth which saw Yeul.
But I have a question, can really anyone change the future?
Maybe a part of it, as Noel and Serah may change, but always will be ''bad endings''.
I think though, you need a lot of chapters to really complete the story, as Light is a person who doesn't love really easily, huh? What do you think:)
I strongly believe Caius wont disappoint his wife again, even if this time he will re-fall into the dilemna; Yeul of Light?
I can't wait to see...I sent kisses!
| Lotusbitch 1/21/13 . chapter 23
I think Caius should end with Light but have her escape from him again lol Light is not happy with the fact that all her friends are gone especially Serah since she died from seeing her last vision. It is touching to see that he cares for her as his wife but I think there might be conflicts later on.
| Cascade00 1/21/13 . chapter 23
No! Not that question again! Yuel or Lightning! It just has to be Lightning! Seriously this is a fanfiction for Lightning and Caius. So in the end Lightnig and Caius ends up together!
| Lotusbitch 1/13/13 . chapter 22
Caius is finally back with Light now, which I'm very happy to see. Although, his changed of behavior towards her is kind of sudden. In the past he was forcing her to sleep with him which was unconventional and not loving and now he acts that he cares for her as being her 'husband' and the father of their child. I hope it's just his fatherly instincts rather than love. Hope that Light will find a way a to break free from him and save the world and be the icy cold and strong woman that she was before. But nevertheless, I'm glad to see that they're back together at least for this moment.
Excellent job with this chapter. Look forward to the next one :)
| Cascade00 1/13/13 . chapter 22
Her motherly instinct just kick in! Caius and Lightning what bitter sweet love that they have. One moment he's hurting and then the next he loves her! I just love that transition where your on the edge of your toes! Wondering what he's going to do next! And it seems that Lightning is opening her heart little by little to Caius! Their son is going to be so adorable! And super power! Come on its a child by Caius and Lightning I bet their son will have a couple of neat powers or two! Now I'm left to think what's going to happen next!
| i 1/13/13 . chapter 22
The next BEST chapter os the story! Breathtaking, Nirianne, you did an excellent job!
I just fell in love with it!
Finally Caius came back to claim her, which he did, but in a sweet way. He loves her, and I can't wait for him to prove that to Light. Will she tell him straight, that she loves him too? Well...we will see.
But there is something else in this chapter, that twists the story really wonderfully. Caius was fighting against the Cieths, in order to protect Claire. Why he was fighting? Do they have a common enemy in their way? Is really Chaos only by their side? What else is longing to claim their lives? Behind the darkness...
An other fact, which made me crazy! Light loves her baby boy! And even HER FRIENDS wont stop her from having him. Then her dream of the previous chapter came in my mind. Will Caius be with them, as a father, of course is ever Light accept him? Oh my...! I am at a loss!
Their fighting was really amuzing! Light was shouting why he even cared and then she made the question I wanted to hear most, ''Why he helps her? He doesn't love her!''
I was praying, as I was reading, for Caius to finally express his feelings, but he didn't...but as himself said so, we shall see. He will stop at nothing to make her love him with her heart...
Ahh...I love that romance! Trully sweet.
Kisses, be strong:)
| Lotusbitch 12/25/12 . chapter 20
Everyone now knows that she is pregnant. Feeling really bad for Light since she nows carries Caius's child. Wonder if Caius really had feelings for Light if they were just carnal, then it would be meaningless for him to care for Light at all since he used her to give an heir :/
Love the end, where Light is waiting at the shores of Valhalla for Caius to return. Very sad yet nostalgic :)
| Lotusbitch 12/25/12 . chapter 21
Hey Nasa-chan *huggles* X3
How are you doing girl? Nice to see you back with a new chapter of HTC which I have been waiting for a long time to update xD
Good to see that Caius is finally back in action in his fight against Serah which I feel sorry for since she has not been able to save her sister. Looks Light’s child is starting to grow which is weird since she has not eaten anything since she has discovered that she found out that she was pregnant. Although, I fight it even stranger that she misses Caius despite him raping her during their time together in Valhalla where they barely had a relationship which was a forced one.
Anyhoo, excellent job on this chapter. It was dark on some part where this chapter revolves around Light’s unborn child and her new powers of Chaos. Very evil :D
| i 12/25/12 . chapter 21
Hey Nirianne! I knew you were going to update today! And I was longing for this chapter so much! It was the best Christmas present I ever had, thank you:)
Now, now let's get serious:)
I remember the scene between Caius and Serah. It was a wonderful scene, and I loved Caius in this one! I must have seen it...thirty times?
I loved your own version too, because Caius and Light, in the game's storyline should had a most interesting relationship. I believe that every fan was a bit disappointed by the aftermath.
But anyway, we have you and your story. And yes, it's true all good things having an end...:(
About Light. I suspected that her baby would grow up in that rediculous rate. Her powers are so frightening, and Claire finally realized that she doesn't belong to the city of Academia. I loved the way she left; first she protected her only child, disarmed with grace all the soldiers...but not Hope, not this way. He's like a younger brother to her, someone whom she still have the need to protect.
But still...the punch was a punch, (I liked that;)
And then, I admired how she manipulated their minds; they wont remember her as Caius' wife, you said. Brilliant.
And now, I guess, she will go and find him? Has the time finally come?
I want to see some interaction between them.
Now, to end this review, I'd like to say something about Dohnovan! I read the first chapter just yesterday and I found it so charming! But please forgive me that I can't review there, please, please, please!
It's because of my...usual problem, but nothing will stop me from reading it. I just long for Caius to meet the brave Lightning there too. Update soon enough, okay?
*Alert, alert! Go to Youtube and watch the first video with gameplay about Lightning Returns, okay sweety? If you have seen it, tell us your opinion about it. Kisses*
| CrystariumRose 12/25/12 . chapter 21
Sorry it cut off x-x
For your Dohnovan story I'm glad that I can read and comment it!
Keep on writing! Look forward on your next chapter for Heir to Chaos and the Dohnovan story!