I thought this was great! It was the first story I had tea that looked at him in another light. Even better, I could actually see this happening! Great job!

Lol This was truly funny. Tho funnily I kept hearing Dr. Zoidberg's voice with The Pale Man. XD

i wouldnt really think of the pale man as a nice kind of guy

Pffff!

Nice one-shot! I could barely refrian myself from laughing!

This is sooo cute. I love Pan's Labyrinth. The Pale Man freaks me out beyond words. This makes me feel better. From now on after the movie ends and I am lying alone in the dark, freaked out and wondering if the Pale Man is under my floor, I'll think of this and not be so freaked out.

After becoming familiar with Doug Jones, I decided to read this and yes quite a laugh. Good job!

That's hilarious! I was legit LOL! You know what? You should make a story, like a full story. That's what i'm gonna do & it'll be awesome. Anywho, this was great! Good job!

U-Hinged

It hurts to breathe! LOL!