I love how you incoprated ICO into this! Well done! I can't wait for the next installment!

I look forward to the next installment!

This was good! However, I'd like to note that ICO was actually a "spiritual prequel" to SOTC. :)

The relationship between Mono and Wander I find to be absolutely adorable.

I love it!

No don't kill Wander T_T

Good chapters, I definitely like this Shaman, he seems to be benevolent. I am also intrigued by sister Miya, she seems to be a good friend of Mono. Nami is the devil herself, what a stupid woman.
Ohh, and poor Wander, he doesn't even imagine that two weeks he spent in the prison will be nothing compared to the sixteen huge stone beasts the guy is gonna face in the future. I would faint if I even catch a glimpse of Cenobia (and he's one of the smallest).
Thank you, this was a very good update!

Great story! I'm intrigued by it. I am enjoying it all so far XD. Good Job!

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I really like how you're reinterpreting the games. Nice allusion to Ico! I also really like the way you went back and forth between conversations - just like in a movie :-) Looking forward to the next chapter!

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I sense a witch hunt.

Hmm, the power of resurrection. That's interesting. Makes sense, though. And I like the feeling to Mono's "cursed fate". She's holy, but also demonic? It's all a bit darker than usual - mostly it's Mono in the role of victim of a curse, not her really being the evil itself - but to me that's absolutely not a problem :)
I indeed recognize things of Christian faith (just watched a tv series about Christianity, so it's all fresh in memory); it feels a bit off as there's also a shaman, which I believe doesn't really fit there, but as you say, the religion isn't clear in the game, so as far as I'm concerned you're free to "make one up". No worries about offending me, anyway XD

Please continue!11

Yes! Please continue!

Don't worry; people read it. Sotc isn't exactly the most visited fandom, but there are still readers! If you want to continue, do.
I still like the story; Mono's very different from other stories, but also from her game version (at least, as far as I can tell; she isn't exactly a lot in the game...) I also like Wander's little sister
You do jump around with the tenses; sometimes you use the present simple, then the past simple. Unless there is a clear reason (which I haven't found here (yet)), you should be consistent about the tenses.

Another SotC fanfic! And a good one. I really like interaction between Wander and Agro. And Mono's delicate personality really shown here. I do wish you continue this. By the way, I also like when Mono asked his purpose and he answer it is to 'Wander' :D