Interesting...I like that you put something of your own into this and developed aspects Wonderland a bit. I've been doing that too, I'm really curious and excited to see whether the second season will explore that more. I certainly hope so!

Ooh, this is also very chilling, and an intriguing twist indeed for the ep! Poor Jefferson/Hatter. I was kind of reminded of the Phantom's magical lasso, but it was definitely different enough.

As always, the descriptions are very vivid, and definitely leave scope for more.