|Reviews for Heartlines|
| Louricam The Manga Freak 12/28/12 . chapter 2
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
| AquaStarlight 10/6/12 . chapter 2
This has to be one of the greatest things I have ever read. Seriously, like, you display the character's emotions and actions so well, and your writing is just amazing.
As a hardcore Conflictingshipper, I really love the parts of the story that happen in the present - even if they're a bit sad (WHY DID YOU LET HIM LEAVE, LEAF? D:) - but I also find the Burningleaf parts cute as well. You're good at writing drama and making it interesting and not too lame or overated at the same time.
I've already re-read this story a billion times, and I can't wait for the next chapter. This story is definitely going on my favorite's list. :)
| emm297 9/1/12 . chapter 2
Really love your style of writing! The alternations between past and present are quite refreshing I think you really managed to capture Blue and Green's personalities well here too. AND omg when he said she wasn't going to be just another random girl to him... My heart just melted right there.
Hope you update soon! Can't wait for the last bit :)
| a random reader 8/22/12 . chapter 2
still hoping it would end up with Burningelaf. still hoping, and while i'm at it, i'm crossing my fingers and shut my eyes.
| XxTwistedThornxX 7/28/12 . chapter 2
This is awesome! Just what I've been needing...so...more?
| Guest 7/23/12 . chapter 2
This is fantastic! Dont know why you haven't updated in a while. Dont leave us hanging!
| Sweet but Psycho 7/1/12 . chapter 2
Ah, I started following this story at the right time, apparently! Didn't take long at all for the next chapter to be posted, from my perspective!
I'm officially a Blue girl. I was leaning towards Red in the first chapter, but now that I see more of him, I'm definitely leaning towards Blue. He's simply not aware enough of Leaf's needs, he's only thinking of what he wants for the wedding. But it took a while for me to arrive at that conclusion- you write conflict very well! I've said it before, but I felt the need to tell you again here :P
I'm very interested in this thing Leaf and Daisy (mostly Daisy) have decided to do with Blue. I have a feeling it's going to lead to a lot of drama. Like the wedding- I can't wait for that bit.
Not as much to say here. Still no spelling or grammar errors that I could find- well done! These chapters are ridiculously long, but the story's so good that I'm actually really grateful to have more to read! I was disappointed when I got to the bottom.
I don't mind waiting a bit longer if it means the finale will be as well written as the first two parts! Can't wait to read it :D
| Guest 7/1/12 . chapter 2
Hey this is a awesome fanfic. Please make Blue X Leaf.
| Sweet but Psycho 6/20/12 . chapter 1
Holy, that was a long read. I thoroughly enjoyed myself though. You write the two couples very well; whenever we were reading a scene with Red and Leaf, I found myself cheering for such a sweet guy, and thinking that he was my favourite. And then we'd skip to the present, and I'm suddenly done with Red and infatuated with Gre- er, Blue (sorry, manga fan here). And then back again. I still don't know who I like more!
The growth (or degrowth, as it seems in Leaf's case, to me at least) is done very well with all the characters throughout the story. I also loved how Leaf referred to all of Blue's chickies by the day of the week. In fact, Blue and Leaf's interactions in general made me giggle a lot. Especially Blue's line 'You're a psychopath, you know that?' (or something like that anyway).
Leaf seems almost similar to Grace to me. It might be the lack of aggressiveness, or the fact that she seems to have the two guys that she hangs out with gunning for her. I don't know for sure though.
The only negative thing I can say is that I'm a little unsure of the meaning of the bits from the present- from what I can see, either Leaf and Red's relationship has hit the rocks, or she's cheating on him. I'm sort of leaning towards the former. It just seems more likely to me, for some reason. Unless it's all explained in the sequel (which I am dying to read, BTW) I would suggest making that a little clearer.
No spelling or grammatical errors that I could find :) I like your romance stories- they're just intimate enough to make it cozy without getting gushy and lame. And there's lotsa conflict. I like it lots :)
| 5th Dimension 3/31/12 . chapter 1
Very well done. It ties everything in a perfect knot, which I can't wait to see untangle. I hope to see a conclusion.
| Moon Lily91 3/28/12 . chapter 1
Oh, God... This was freaking beautiful. Much better than what I wrote. I can't even criticize it because I'm overwhelmed by the emotion in this story. The personalities of the characters were so real, and the story flowed so nicely. You did a great job writing this!